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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21
Man, this was good! It was great seeing Scott and Jean getting revenge on Kitty and Rogue! And very funny! Boy, the shame had to be killing them. :D
Seeing them hiding from the others while they are pestering them about their private life reminded of No Rain, even though in that fic Jean blew up on Rogue and Kitty AFTER they were pestering them, not the other way around. :)
Now I want reading the next chapter! ^_^
Man, this was good! It was great seeing Scott and Jean getting revenge on Kitty and Rogue! And very funny! Boy, the shame had to be killing them. :D
Seeing them hiding from the others while they are pestering them about their private life reminded of No Rain, even though in that fic Jean blew up on Rogue and Kitty AFTER they were pestering them, not the other way around. :)
Now I want reading the next chapter! ^_^
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...jott smut. :D
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hank didn’t notice her bruises ?
Jean, you just have to say that you were making out
oh man stop Jean, stop lololol oh man, you’ll have to erase their mind now lol
oh no, the idiots, they told the others….Jean won’t bear it, her powers will go crazy
If the professor doesn’t help, they’ll leave
Carry on
JOTT FOREVER !
Wen
Jean, you just have to say that you were making out
oh man stop Jean, stop lololol oh man, you’ll have to erase their mind now lol
oh no, the idiots, they told the others….Jean won’t bear it, her powers will go crazy
If the professor doesn’t help, they’ll leave
Carry on
JOTT FOREVER !
Wen
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20
Oh, Hell. The other students couldn't simply mind in their own business, could they? And the thigns were going so well at last...
A very emotional chapter, pal. I'm dying for seeing what will happen now. I guess Scott will get angry with Jean now. I hope she can explain to him how Rogue and Kitty had pestered her until she snapped.
I'm feeling this end this already gearing towards the end. A pity, but I'll enjoy it while it lasts.
Oh, Hell. The other students couldn't simply mind in their own business, could they? And the thigns were going so well at last...
A very emotional chapter, pal. I'm dying for seeing what will happen now. I guess Scott will get angry with Jean now. I hope she can explain to him how Rogue and Kitty had pestered her until she snapped.
I'm feeling this end this already gearing towards the end. A pity, but I'll enjoy it while it lasts.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great update and I figured as much that Jean would break first but hope to see an update soon. Keep up the great writings
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I just knew this would get out and you know Jean normally has a firm grip but when she loses her temper she really goes all out when she does. I bet those girls got a bit more out of her then they thought they would and their view of Jean changed from all the stuff they do lol. Well they may not feel great now but once the shock gets over it and they get comfortable with everyone knowing things will get easier.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, poor Scott and Jean. I sense comfort smut coming up for the next chapter. ;)
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great update and keep it up. I guess they decided to say fuck let's be together. And now Rogue has her proof but will they let it stand or tell everyone that they don't care anymore
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
You have written a really heart-wrenching chapter, pal. It was a very intense emotional turmoil.
I loved how Scott dealt with Duncan. That prick had got it coming for a long time. He never took Scott seriously, and that was his mistake.
Yet... Jean getting helplessly beaten up and nearly raped by Duncan despite she is perfectly capable to kick his sorry ass is something I have seen too many times in fanfiction. I don't tell it didn't make sense in the context of the situation or your story, but I think I'd have preffered Scott showed up right after Jean slammed Duncan on the lockers.
Anyway it is a minor gripe.
I very much enjoyed when they fessed up at last their feelings and fucked like bunnies in heat. Beautifully done.
And that naughty Rogue... I wonder what she''l do now she knows. ;)
You have my full attention, pal. I know you won't squander it. :)
You have written a really heart-wrenching chapter, pal. It was a very intense emotional turmoil.
I loved how Scott dealt with Duncan. That prick had got it coming for a long time. He never took Scott seriously, and that was his mistake.
Yet... Jean getting helplessly beaten up and nearly raped by Duncan despite she is perfectly capable to kick his sorry ass is something I have seen too many times in fanfiction. I don't tell it didn't make sense in the context of the situation or your story, but I think I'd have preffered Scott showed up right after Jean slammed Duncan on the lockers.
Anyway it is a minor gripe.
I very much enjoyed when they fessed up at last their feelings and fucked like bunnies in heat. Beautifully done.
And that naughty Rogue... I wonder what she''l do now she knows. ;)
You have my full attention, pal. I know you won't squander it. :)
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, what a chapter !
It was close from a power surge or a murder
Not yet "I love you" but the admited their feeling
And Rogue, well no, they don't mind if she knows they're together, it's the fact she know that they're sexual active which is a little more troubling lol
Carry on !
Jott forever
and please, could you send me a mail when you post a new chapter ?
Wen
It was close from a power surge or a murder
Not yet "I love you" but the admited their feeling
And Rogue, well no, they don't mind if she knows they're together, it's the fact she know that they're sexual active which is a little more troubling lol
Carry on !
Jott forever
and please, could you send me a mail when you post a new chapter ?
Wen