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for My Friend, My Lover

by marvelmaster616

person Wen
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, where is the "I love you" ?
carry on !
lol
Wen
person Wen
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, where is the "I love you" ?
carry on !
lol
Wen
person Agent-G
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23

Hey man nice start here with all the humor it was very nice how they went from being hounded to just being lightly teased as if what they do isn't a big deal and not getting a moment of peace. Loved how they stunbled upon Logan and Ororo there that was nice and ironic given how they gave Kitty/Rogue a show now it was their turn to watch.
person alrischa
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel for Scott and Jean. The poor dears. But I do hope they'll get to do it in the car this time. ;)
person Josh
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just got done with the last chapter and hope to see more of your writings soon. I like this story so much I hope it doesn't end any time soon. keep up the grerat work and hope for a new update soon
person Josh
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Slick great update love the payback in 21 I am going to read 22 soon but I just had to tell you a great way for payback especially on the two who started the shit once it hit the fan they couldn't relax and just enjoy the weekend but they got some revenge on Kitty and Rogue who started all the drama for those two.Hope to hear from ya for 23 and the rest
person Jenskott
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22

God, your professor/mentor/fatehr figure talking to you about your sexual life and the boundaries you must follow. There can be something more embarassing? :)

I'm glad of Jean has managed making up things with Kitty, at least, and Kitty has the good sense to get ashamed -and I'm not talking ONLY about behaving like a peeping tom-. In fact, Kitty has been a good help now. We can only hope and see what happens now.

Logan was very helpful, threatening the New Mutants to force them to stop. They were getting really annoying with their unwillingness to understand what Scott and Jean's private activities were Scott and Jean's business, not THEIRS.

Your fic is winding down and now there's only left the big finale. Go, pal. I know you won't disappoint your fans.
person alrischa
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a nice, light chapter. Brings closure to all the chaos in the mansion. You promised the next chapter is going to be big, so, can't wait for it. :p
person Agent-G
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22

Well it's nice to see things are calming down now and I guess Xavier would have to step in and lay a few ground rules given that they still live under his care and all. But it was nice he was understandable. It was nice for Jean and Scott to have those talks and clear the air and stuff with Kitty and Logan. Although I do wonder how they'll patch things up with Rogue.
person agent-g
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 21

Well I can see how Jean and Scott are handling things I'm surprised that by the weekend they just don't rent a hotel and just stay there just for some peace and quiet or something lol.

I see that kitty and Rogue got a tasts of things and it was a new kinky thing Jean and Scott did, they may be careful or they may like someone looking in on them, and at least now Kitty and Rogue know what it's like to have good sex so they now have something to compare to for their own first times.