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for My Friend, My Lover

by marvelmaster616

person Wen
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, we got the 3 words at least lol
JOTT FOREVER !
Wen
person Agent-G
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25

Well that was a nice way to end the fic I think you did a nice job of this fic and I can't wait for those one shots you promised either those will be really good to read later on. Great job and I can't wait to see what fic you put up next.
person bragadont
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My oh my! That was one of the hottest fics I've ever read!
And the last chapter... woooo!! I wish I was able to dream like that.

Great job all around with yor fic!
person Wen
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ggrr slicky, another one, watch your back ! lol
JOTT FOREVER
Wen
person Josh
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey you sure it will end in the next chapter I hope not cuz this is a grerat read and I like to read it and I am glad that they want to tell each other on how they feel for eachther no matter what they have to do.
person Agent-G
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24

Well that was a nice little moment with them and a nice continuation from the last chapters as well. I think you said there was one more chatper left and I think it's as good as time as any to wrap it up I think you pretty much most out of the way and if not then the one shots you got planned certainly will.
person alrischa
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, why'd you have to go spoil the fun at the end? But nonetheless, a great smut chapter. ;)
person Wen
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
argghh how dare you make us wait again ggrrrr lol
JOTT FOREVER !
Wen
person Jenskott
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23

Sometimes you just haven't luck, have you? I was laughing when I was seeing how everyone was getting in their way. And how at the end they peeked accidentally on Logan and Ororo. It was very funny, specially after of the angst of some of the later chapters.

I'm very intrigued for how you plan wrapping up the story. On the other hand I'm sad because you are about of wrapping up the story, and it'll mean the end. Not matter what, write the next update soon. Please
person Wen
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, even if they made a little payback, they got caugth
Wen