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I really enjoy your story and look forward to your next chapter. just out of curiosity will you have any other couples in this story? I think Kurt and Kitty would really enjoy a " friends with benefits" arrangement(sorry, I'm a nut for Kurtty stories even if it's periferal and I think both of their conversations with Ororo (or KUrt's with LOgan?)would be Funny ) Anyways I really enjoy this so I'll keep reading.

oh man, how could she talk to Ororo so easily about that, and Ororo lol
Jean is about to rape Scott rigth here, the day they'll kiss they'll go to the next step immediatelly lol
carry on
Wen

Well that was a very interesting chapter and I really liked that talk there with Ororo at the end. Well if Jean wants the friend with benifits she'll have to dump duncan now considering even doing that would still be cheating and after the week she's had that shouldn't be too much of a problem. Although I guess before she adn Scott can try it out he'll have to do the same with Taryn although wouldn't it be a bit hyporicital to dump her sleep with another women just like that (even if it is Jean) especially since he said he wasn't ready for that kind of thing?

Other beautiful chapter. I can see the sexual tension is wearing down theirs nerves. They really need some help.

I loved Jean went to the older, wiser and mroe experienced female role model she had in the house. Pretty logical since she couldn't ask her mother.

I hope they dump theirs dates soon.

Poor Scott and Jean! You torture them too much! Get them both into bed, pronto! :p

great chapter

Here you have my review again, pal. Although I don't remember what I said earlier. Oh, well.

Your story is very good. The dreams were very livid and I got a chuckle when I saw theirs reactions the next morning. And I liked how you portrayed Jean. It's amazing how people misunderstand her. "On top of dealing with a jerk off boyfriend, renegade powers, and the everyday life of an X-man, living under one roof with a bunch of ravenous mutant teens who often scoffed at her for being ‘little miss perfect’ when she was just trying to set an example and do the right thing"... YOU TELL THEM, JEAN!

I hope Jean dumped Duncan soon and Scott wrenches the leech of him so they can vent their sexual tension... or else they'll kill someone. ^_^

Yay, it's back up again. I can't really remember what I reviewed before, but in any case, love the teaser beginning (MORE SMUT DAMNIT! :p). This fic is bound to be hot! ;)

Like I said great start man I hate how we both lost something when this site crashed oh well it better not happen again that's what I say.