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great chapter i really liked the bit at the beginning o how jean worked up to ask him that was good keep up the good work

wow!!! tats all i hv to say... wow!!!

Part Five

It was about time! I liked how you set up the dialogue. I can tell it took a lot work.

A great sex scene. Worth of the long wait. Though, I doubt Jean had felt pain when her hymen broke. In fact, given that it's a thin menbrane uses to disintegrate alone in the adolescency, with some physical exercise -for example, go cycling-, it's likely it had dissapeared for then (Jean is eighteen and she wroks out daily).

Chapter 5

Well I like how you had Jean approach this and gave him the options she did that really worked out well for the plot of the story and what you wrote earlier. Very cool sex scene althougth for a bit more realism maybe have them at least take a few minutes to warm up lol. But hey you can ignore that if you want anyway just a thought. Although they would be sore as hell the next day, plus I have to wonder if they'll gete caught the enxt day by Logan's nose? That is if they can get to the showers before they meet him.

Damn, finally! That is all. :p

Well at least he's still also perturbated by those dreams, but he's taking rather bad his break up
Oh man Jean, what will she say...I hope she won't have the time to, that feelings and desire will come first... Just speak about the dreams, and he'll realize that you were having the same...
Oh man she said it...
Tell him you love him!
For what you can tell...or feel Jean ? lol Yeah that what I thought lol
But expresse your mutuals feelings for crying out loud, it'd be better for both of you even if it's still more a love making than just sex
If nobody has heard them they're lucky lol
You're perfect as lovers because you love each other!
But "friend with benefits" overall when one of them yet knows he loves the other, it's like being used!
For me it's not friendship anymore since they made love, it's too strange. I know it was yet the case in your other fic, I mean, they weren't in love at first, but they didn't know eachother, there it's not the same
CARRY ON
JOTT FOREVER !
Wen

Eep! Cliffhanger! :p Let them get on with it already! It's been too long! Also, I can't wait to see what Scott's reaction to this will be. :D

Actually, come to think of it, I wouldn't doubt that Jean owned thongs. But hey, you're the author. ;)

Chapter 4

Well that breakup with Jean was long time in coming. Although you got to feel bad for Taryn, you know this would have all been easier if you just had Scott single to begin with. Cause now that Jean is going to seduce Scott right after his breakup...well...she's kind of a slut now that she would do that. I mean what kind of girl tried to sleep with a guy after he had his heart broken? I mean at least make her wait a bit and let Scott get over it a bit. You know Taryn wouldn't go out and sleep with the first person she saw.

Jean was tempted to say yes to Duncan when he asked her if she was taking him for a moron, I did it at her place lol
Lol for Duncan reaction, I'm sure he'll say that he is the one who broke with her, but what does he have in mind ? I knew he would turned the things! he's so predictable
Scott must be deligthed to hear the new !
oh is he breaking up with Taryn too ? LOL it's about the rumor !!! God Scott, Jean has break up with Duncan, how can you call it a bad week ?
Jean: "What" ? (YES !!!!) lol
Hmm Jean, you'll be here to comfort him, even if he'll realized that he and Taryn it was nothing
How Jean can be so sure it will happen this night ?
AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH how can you leave us here ! you better carry on and update soon !
JOTT FOREVER !!
Wen

great chapter i liked the break up scenes