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for My Friend, My Lover

by marvelmaster616

person alrischa
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was orgasmic! :D
person x00001
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter so jean and scott are lovers now thats good can't wait to find out what happens next
person Wen
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, Jean's room is kind of sound-proofed, but Scott's one wasn't
Now Logan better don't enter in the 2 rooms lol
I don't understand why, with a wide opened bond, they don't feel that they're in love, they should, and they should even tell it by automatism
What if they don't wake up before the other? oh man lol
JOTT FOREVER!
Wen
person Agent-G
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 7

Nice chapter as they start to explore a few different things. I wonder if they'll start looking up things on the internet or sign out certain books to try more things to try out in bed. AS for someone finding out, they should know it's hard to keep anything secret for long in that mansion lol. But boy when that cat gets out of the bag (if you think i'm going to do a pussy joke think again) then that will be hilarious.

Anyways I can't wait to see what else you got going for this fic.
person Jenskott
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six

This part was very funny. I can see they're practically glowing. Still I think they were a tad TOO obvious. They should be more careful or they'll be caught.

I like a lot ^_^. I want reading more.
person Jenskott
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six

This part was very funny. I can see they're practically glowing. Still I think they were a tad TOO obvious. They should be more careful or they'll be caught.

I like a lot ^_^. I want reading more.
person x00001
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter looks like jean still got problems can't wait to see how she gets over them
person alrischa
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Victoria's Secret eh? The next chapter is going to be very interesting. I wonder if Scott is actually going to recognise the colour purple. ;)
person Agent-G
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6

Very cool morning after chapter, I really liked seeing them after that last one. Although they may want to tone it down while around others if they don't want them to find out. While alone they can do whatever they wanted but they may need to put up an 'act' as it were to keep them guessing. I do look forward to the next chapter since Jean seems to be doing a little 'fun' shoping. I'm guessing the more she gets into this that she'll eventually gather the strength to try and look up a sex shop later on lol. Maybe buy that 'Black Queen' outfit from the comics there.
person wen
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol they will see the two of them strangely happy at the same time, there will have gossip
Lol about the sense of humour
yes there look must have worth the move lol, maybe if Jean erases their mind after? lol
Well done Jean, it's plausible, well even if they should have heard them lol
I hope that Logan won't come in Scott's room lol
You must tell Jean that you love her Scott
ARGH Scott, SHOWER !!
beware there is ears everywhere in this mansion!
And Scott had forgotten to shower....well Logan hadn't pick up anything about them before they made love...
LOL Jean will buy sexy underwears...
ALERT LOGAN IS THERE !
I think Ororo has understood the reason of their good mood, but I don't think that Logan would like the idea of "friend with benefits" as me, I think he would rather "like" them to have had sex because of love.
One point for Wen, Ororo knew
ah? Scott had showered finally ?
Great Jean, that's leave you alone for your shopping!
Wen