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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
they'll be caught, they'll be caugth lol
maybe in the shop ? lol
CARRY ON
JOTT FOREVER
and I'm going to bed, it's 4 a.m.........
Wen
maybe in the shop ? lol
CARRY ON
JOTT FOREVER
and I'm going to bed, it's 4 a.m.........
Wen
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, they're getting more bold aren't they? I'm surprised no one walked in during the locker room romp lol
So, are they going to try the backseat of Scott's car next? ;)
So, are they going to try the backseat of Scott's car next? ;)
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't wait to find out what happens
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter and nice DR session. For a mintute I thought it would be them using that for a little 'relief' but I guess that's later on. Liked the lockeroom scene with them that was nice and to see a little more of their adventerous sidee showing. I liked the talk between Jean and Ororo, I wonder what else ororo will teach Jean later on? That will be fun seeing the older woman tell her quite a few sexual things they could try.
Also a friend of mine has a Amara/OC fic up here called "A Heated Moment" it's a deleted scene from his fic "Knight's Calling" at FF.net and you should check them out. They're pretty good.
Also a friend of mine has a Amara/OC fic up here called "A Heated Moment" it's a deleted scene from his fic "Knight's Calling" at FF.net and you should check them out. They're pretty good.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Part Eight
Again, very good sex scene. And character development, too. Qhoting Jean... What’s not to like about that?
Very funny seeing them making up excuses. They really need being careful. And nice Amanda's mention. I like Kurt and Amanda together -perhaps because they were a canon couple in the comcis-.
Again, very good sex scene. And character development, too. Qhoting Jean... What’s not to like about that?
Very funny seeing them making up excuses. They really need being careful. And nice Amanda's mention. I like Kurt and Amanda together -perhaps because they were a canon couple in the comcis-.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...hot sex in the shower! I demand more smut! :D
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
Nice shower scene why do I get the feeling that when you were writing Sinister Soldiers that idea poped in your head and you wanted to 'continue' that moment you had to cut off lol. Anyways it's still good but yeah they may have to try to remember to tone it done some just in case. I can't wait to see what they try out next and I see you're leading up to Kurt/Amanda as well. will you do you're own version of Shadow Dance or just kind of comment on what happened in that episode?
Nice shower scene why do I get the feeling that when you were writing Sinister Soldiers that idea poped in your head and you wanted to 'continue' that moment you had to cut off lol. Anyways it's still good but yeah they may have to try to remember to tone it done some just in case. I can't wait to see what they try out next and I see you're leading up to Kurt/Amanda as well. will you do you're own version of Shadow Dance or just kind of comment on what happened in that episode?
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't wait to see what scott and jean get up to next
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She felt his love...
Hey, he made her bed, but didn't changed her sheets..
beware, the bathroom isn't sound-proofing lol
Wow, well caught with Kurt and Kitty lol
JOTT FOREVER and with a wide opened bond, they can't ignore their feeling longer
CARRY ON
Wen
Hey, he made her bed, but didn't changed her sheets..
beware, the bathroom isn't sound-proofing lol
Wow, well caught with Kurt and Kitty lol
JOTT FOREVER and with a wide opened bond, they can't ignore their feeling longer
CARRY ON
Wen
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Part Seven
Getting in the spirit, indeed.
I can see Jean is a girl thorough. And anxious.
That session was very good. Very passionate and beatifully written. Still I think you committed a mistake:
"Scott’s breathing quickly became more ragged as she felt him start to work his jeans, undoing the fly and giving them a hard tug."
Did you mean 'he felt her start to work'? I believe it makes more sense.
Anyway, good chapter. I like how they're starting to experiment and explore possibilities. It's realistic.
Getting in the spirit, indeed.
I can see Jean is a girl thorough. And anxious.
That session was very good. Very passionate and beatifully written. Still I think you committed a mistake:
"Scott’s breathing quickly became more ragged as she felt him start to work his jeans, undoing the fly and giving them a hard tug."
Did you mean 'he felt her start to work'? I believe it makes more sense.
Anyway, good chapter. I like how they're starting to experiment and explore possibilities. It's realistic.