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May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
great stories love them like the personas you created for all the characters and the relationship and the sex that follows are all realistic and well put together. Great work on all your stories
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November 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Love the story and esp. the ending.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good start. Looking forward to reading more.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was one of the nicest jott fics ive ever read. Three cheers 4 jott Woot~ i love the way u shaped the sotry. GOgogo
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, that story was sooooooooooo great. Write more!!! I'll ALWAYS be a fan of you and jott!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, that story was sooooooooooo great. Write more!!! I'll ALWAYS be a fan of you and jott!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24
They had been thwarted more times? It isn't a wonder they are feeling horny like Hell and the NEED going out and getting a realease.
Their chat about Ororo and Loganw as really nice.
Sex on the car's hood and on the grass? Well, they are kinky. Then again, it isn't news.
You are right, they have come a long way. Their relationship has made them growing up and it's grown stronger cause it. Anybody could see that (anybody with brains, that is).
Geez, they have been interrupted right when they were going to tell something interesting (Infamous Summers luck strikes again, I suppose). Then again, we have another chapter to go. :)
They had been thwarted more times? It isn't a wonder they are feeling horny like Hell and the NEED going out and getting a realease.
Their chat about Ororo and Loganw as really nice.
Sex on the car's hood and on the grass? Well, they are kinky. Then again, it isn't news.
You are right, they have come a long way. Their relationship has made them growing up and it's grown stronger cause it. Anybody could see that (anybody with brains, that is).
Geez, they have been interrupted right when they were going to tell something interesting (Infamous Summers luck strikes again, I suppose). Then again, we have another chapter to go. :)
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25
The end was beautiful. It's curious, but I liked more details like their pre-bed rituals than the final sex scenes or the "I love you" moment (besides, I think you stretched out a tad too much the parts where Scott repeated over and over how wonderful was Jean and how much he loved her, and viceversa. Some fans can think it is being excessively reiterated). I think it is because it FELT like if they were a stable couple, who had already developed habits through years living together.
I liked the "dream" sequence. It was fitting after the wet dreams they had during the first chapters.
One of your best works.
The end was beautiful. It's curious, but I liked more details like their pre-bed rituals than the final sex scenes or the "I love you" moment (besides, I think you stretched out a tad too much the parts where Scott repeated over and over how wonderful was Jean and how much he loved her, and viceversa. Some fans can think it is being excessively reiterated). I think it is because it FELT like if they were a stable couple, who had already developed habits through years living together.
I liked the "dream" sequence. It was fitting after the wet dreams they had during the first chapters.
One of your best works.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story love the whole thing. But I am glad they got together but it had to ahppen when they should of asked before everything went crazy. I loved this fic cuz of what it symbolizes for them and hope to read more from you. Keep up the great writing
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yum! ;) Hurrah for spin-offs!