rate_review Reviews

You seriously need to research drug-addict behavior. It would improve your story very much, plus lend it the bit of realism it lacks. This fic is good, but it could have been so much better, not as childish...Good try, though..

Emotinal, tangible and a sub-Logan. What more can we ask for, save a sequel? or an epilogue that has a bappy ending? It was an awesome story anyway though. And really, really, good.

*smiles and sighs happily*. That was good...but damn it all ta hell, there needs to be more! Even if you don't add another chapter, at least make a sequal!!! Please? *begs* It was really, really, really good!

lol...I almost freaked out like Lily when I read the first chapter. You need to warn a person! Great story. I don't know how i missed it before. I'm a L/R slash addict! I can usually sniff 'em out. :) Now you need to write the sequel. i wanna read all the TLC it takes to cure Remy of his dangerous obsessions. ;)

Wow... I'm sorry I ranted at you now. That'll teach me to speek before a story is finished. *blush* You are going to write about Remy's recovery, aren't you? You can't start a Remy/Logan story and not give 'em a happy ending. That would be crueler than having him end up with the Witch again... well, maybe not. Thank you for a wonderful story and I am *really* sorry I yelled.

Hmm...the ending seemed a bit rushed, but it was pretty good.

I like it (I love seeing Logan bottom in any type of slash and whether con or non con) though I confess I'm rather hoping for some repurcussions on Logan's part- surely even a rape without being conscious of it is still a rape that affects ones subconscious?

You don't like Remy very much, do you? Although I agree the witch could drive a Saint to booze and drugs this isn't Remy. And let's get straight who the violent one was in the relationship. Remy never promised anyone "unconditional" love and then left them despondent, desperate, confused, shirtless and alone in a frozen hell and then blamed the victim because he was too gutless to take the blame or just say no! Remy isn't strong enough to take on an army of sentinels all alone and fly off with a smile on his face. Remy *would not* treat his friends this way. Sorry for the rant but if you're gonna abuse Remy you gotta expect a little crap.

This is really good so far! Please update soon~! ^^

wow this is good i can't wait to read more!