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Please continue this story! I have to know what happens next! :)

Omg I read the first chapter and I am already hooked... I was not expecting such an opening but man was it good! I look forward to reading the rest!!

Ooh now I think I'm starting to figure things out. Beautiful! Lovely! I love how I have to read over and over again to figure things out! Love a good mystery! I love your style!

Was the whole Jean/Logan sex-fest a false memory? WTF is going on with the Ice Queen and Scott?

I don't think it is possible to love and hate someone at the same time at the intensity that I feel right now! Now I'm going back reading over chapters thinking I might have missed something! We only know what you want us to know so there's no way we can really figure out what's going on!

You're a mad genius! I love it!

HUH! Do I need to start over from the beginning?

Bravo, I am amazed that you don't have over a hundred reviews praising this! I started reading meaning to read only one chapter but I just couldn't stop! It's amazing, beautiful if not a tiny bit confusing here and there but nothing one can't figure around.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Would Storm be able to dismount her high horse if she knew that Jean aggressively pursued the sexual relationship with Logan and that he never came after her? Is she too perfect to get the difference in that scenario? Is she going to let the new guy into her bed as quick as a wink while holding off Logan for so long?

It's still pretty good, and generally clear. But I don't like how Wolverine seems to be arguing from the position of the aggrieved. In spite of his platonic relationship with Ororo, it reflects very badly upon him, (and Rogue to degree) that he acknowledges not guilt for having an affair with a married woman. Certainly Ororo is justified in being put off by his meddling in the marriage of her friends, and if he truly feels he owes Scott nothing simply because he doesn't like him... that really reflects badly on Logan. (and by extension how Ororo would/should view him)

Now I am waiting to find out why the team is being changed. I understand getting Logan to help Rogue but not what X is doing.