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great another wonderful jott fic Woot~ jia you

Hey, sorry I didn't review sooner, I had a bunch of stuff to do and didn't have time to sit down and take my time to read fic. You know you can count on me to appreciate good jott smut. ;)

Lol, when you said the role would be reversed in chap2 you weren't lying lol
Wen

Yes! Now THAT was worth the wait my friend! Another very nice, very heartfelt story with tons of great drama and vivid scenes. While I think the first one was better, this one definitely measures up in my opinion! I like how you gave Jean her turn to be the dominant one here. And in Scott's current state, I think he really needed it. Good job of filling in some of the backstory with their kids and with what happened with Apocalypse. It was very much like the comics, but still kept a nice original twist. There were a few grammar bits here and there, but overall it was a very nice chapter to a very nice story! I loved it and I bow to your efforts my friend! I sure hope you make other NC-17 fics for this site because you really do seem to have a knack for it. While you're filling the comic section, I can take care of the Evo section! So it balance out just fine! Lots of descriptions, drama, and heart...Everything a Scott/Jean fic should be! I love it and thank you very much for writing it. Keep up the excellent work my friend and thank you very much for your support on "Hanging by a Moment" and "My Friend, My Lover!" You rock dude! Slickboy out.

What a begining, really good one
man, dark Phoenix
oh yeah the tree in god, people using it must have been the richest of the world lol
Er ? Scott is on the moon ? how can he be there so fast and how can he breath ?
Awwww cute dialogue between them
Ah ? JAson was mastermind in X2 ? lol I'll got to bed less idiot
ROTFLMAO for the Black Queen outfit !!
She's pregnant ? wow
Carry On
Wen

Wow! Dude this was unbelievably sweet on so many levels! It was the Phoenix Saga NC-17! I loved it! I saw so many references to the comics that it made me jump for joy! That bit about her in the black queen outfit made me laugh! Although I noticed a few grammar mistakes, it was extremely well written! Everything was so vividly described and wonderfully portrayed that I couldn't help but smile the whole time I was reading it! The sex scene was also very unique in that it involved Jean's powers to such a great deal. They really went all out with this one and I like how they got into the spirit! This chapter alone would be a perfect story in the greatest sense, but you say there's going to be another! Dude, you HAVE to update soon! It is SO sweet that I can't wait! I'm so sorry I didn't get around to reading this sooner because it was so great on so many levels that I should punish myself for not doing this sooner! And after all the support you've given me on "Hanging by a Moment" I feel as though I definitely owe you! PLEASE update this story soon! Please give us another wonderful chapter! This so rocks on so many levels! I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading it! Thank you very much for writing this and I urge you to keep up the excellent work! Slickboy out.

Aww, that's so sweet! Keep writing! :)

Omfg. I loved it. You need to update soon!