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for King of Pain

by lovingall

person Blueviper
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MAN!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!! You better put some more of that in here I read this before on the R.O side. Loved it there LOVE it here. MORE!!!!!
person SyJen
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read many x-Men fics that had the kind of Scott where you forget about him the moment you read his name. I can not forget this sexy Scott that you have. That Sex scene was HOTTTTTTT!!!! I am still sweating from it. I hope she is pregnant and Jean leaves him alone, but I think she is desperate so Scott should keep en eye on Ororo. I am a Rolo fan but I love your couple. Fanstatic writing!!
person Kraven
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay you left us with a cliffhanger, so I suggest that you clear up this and tell us if Ro and Logan see what Jena is doing to Scott. I mean Sexy Scott. I love this fic read it yesterday and it is still Awesome! Get writing
person Lorna
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The word Bitach comes to mind. YOU HAVE TO UODATE SOONER I AM NOT THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR HERE I LOVED THIS STORY FROM THE BEGINNING GREAT STUFF!!!!
person SafeHaven
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAt a Bitch and she'e Ororo's friend DANG. Scott better do something because I know Logan would love to catch them like this. UPDATE SOON
person Bluflame
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a bitch Jean is. She is so jealous and now she will do this to SCott and think he will want her back. She is so stupid UPDATe I gots to know what happens next love this
person Hornet
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know the word Bitch has been in everyone's review and guess what it's going to be in mine. Bitch Jean Grey dude what the heck is she thinking that Scott will want her. NOPE!!! SEXY Scott want the Goddess and he has her no matter how Logan tries to be nice. UPDATE
person Spider
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot Damn this is going to get ugly a hurry Jean is a Bitch blowing up the Greenhouse and what is Logan trying to do is he working with the Bitch. Dude answer my questions.I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!
person Kraven
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't let the realtionship end becuase Jean is a bitch. I hope Ororo sends a lightening bolt up her ass. LOVE it Keep Going NOW Excellent work.
person NSB
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U know I hate that ro is with scotter but goddamn Jean is such a bitch UPDATE SOON!