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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can't be serious!!! FIN! You leave Jean alive. Dude Rhayn SEQUEL! You know I love this
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I KNOW You heard me screaming I know you did!!! How dare you let that piece of crap win. I hope Gambit blows her up. You can not end it that way. Nuhuh. Noooo. She can not have Scott. You better have a sequel. AWESOME STORY!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boy are you asking to get yelled at or what! Jean I hate her in this story if I have not conveyed that in my other reviews I am saying it now. Gambit has to know I need to know what is going to happen. Did Logan save her or what? I loved this story so start with the sequel!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT! I know Gambit is going to make her pay or something close to it. That cannot be it. Are you hiding a sequel? What was she thinking trying to kill Ororo. Logan should have killed her but he had to save Ororo. Did he save her? Dude Rhayn come on! LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay after I was sick I could finally write that I hate Jean. I mean she wants Scott so bad she would kill for him. Man!!!!. I know Gambit will make her pay with her life. There has got to be a sequel. What will jubes and the girls? They will know that Jean had something to do with it. I need the next story! Loved it!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me! She must pay. I do not care how you do it just do it in hte next story! I want blood and tears. Okay. By the way. Marvelous story!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am shocked that you would allow such a thing to happen and then to end it with that that that THING smiling. Is Gambit going to make her life hell before he kills her. SEQUEL you mean thing . I LOVE IT!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Jean definitely needs a foot up her ass! The sezziness was smokin, but to me it comes off half the time like he finds Ro and just starts jammin it in, sometimes whether she's willing or not.
Logan and the Cajun are hilarious! Seeing them all trying to outmanuever the other. Poor Ro, you're not a slut. You're just considering your options *drools at the lovely options*
Please Please Please!!!! let them beat up Jean!
Logan and the Cajun are hilarious! Seeing them all trying to outmanuever the other. Poor Ro, you're not a slut. You're just considering your options *drools at the lovely options*
Please Please Please!!!! let them beat up Jean!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She has this all thought out I see. Jubilee and the kids should tell . I hope Ororo does. Scott will not crack He knows somethingis up. Awesome chapter Update
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it keep Jean away from him. She does have a back up plan but would she really tell Scott lies to keep him....YES because she is a bitch continue