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for King of Pain

by lovingall

person wydow
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the part where her mind is talking to her. Is Scott being mean or does he really want Ro and Logan is being evil himself, just like a soap opera. please continue. this is getting better and better.
person Loganlover4ever
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
See I thought
logan would've got on his bike and followed them. This Logan has got a lot of self-control. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Spider
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By now you would have an update. slacker like i'm one to talk Spider
person Spider
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has so many possibilities i am giddy with excitement. I love this soap opera.
person Lorna
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scott and Ororo Hmmmmm....... interesting go on.
person Lorna
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude man i knew Scott would use some mind stuff to make Logan suffer and make Gambit not want him near his stormy
Keep going Girl!!!!!!!! I love it.
person spider
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this. Please continue my soap opera Please oh PLease
person Loganlover4ever
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finish! Finish! Finish! That is some soap opera shit right there and I love it. I really love how you paired 'Ro and Remy and mixing Scott's feelings in there. FINISH!!!!!!!!!
person Lorna
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont they always say that they love you? Sure you do. What will Scott do to Logan some form of mind torture i am sure. please continue SMiles lorna
person Spider
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH Scott's pissed. I think he'll use mental torture on Logan rather than physical. please keep writng and updating as quick as you do.