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for King of Pain

by lovingall

person Spider
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay I will tell you the two reasons why I love this fic. You're humor with the mind talking to Ororo and Logan and Gambit together let the name calling begin. The second reason when the boys do more of their scheming Oohooh I can't wait. Excellent chapter worth the wait
person Kraven
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOl Gambit and Logan together oh boy.Scott hmmmm I'm a liking the possibilities here. wonderful work. i will continue to wait
person wydow
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could have two kids before you update this thing. Come on
person spider
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh Logan's turn keep going like it like it
person Teran
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you'll continue soon.
person Spider
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey Rhayn if you dont hurry up and update this you'll be on the second or third page. HEE HEE
Spider
person lorna
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a slut. her mind whispered. Hee hee. keep writing!!!!!
person Loganlover4ever
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don't stop now!!!!!!
person spider
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!! how can you end like that are you someone who likes cliffhangers of will she or wont she. Dude keep going
person Lorna
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Logan not spying on them makes me wonder if he going to play with Scott's mind. I can not wait for the next chapter please hurry with it. Lorna