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for King of Pain

by lovingall

person Hornet
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay Jean is officially a bitch and liar. Logan is kind of crazy. I want to be Ororo hMMMM SCott. I cracked up when scott said "Can i get out of Ororo and talk to you." LOL and kind of ohhhh. Your Scott is sexy and can i be Ororo. great update keep going.
person karmaxp
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh I love this as always I feel like GAmbit is starting not to trust that Logan wont try to use Ororo. I love your Scott. I think he is Yummy and he and Ororo should do it again. Jean is becoming a bitach and quickly with a little thing called jealousy. keep updating great chappie.
person Kraven
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this . I really love your Scott he's kind fo sexy with the hair and the nice muscles and the sex DO IT AGAIN. I 'm going to love the choas coming excellent chapter keep going
person rololover1
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I smell a scheme...
person SafeHaven
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEen wiating for you to update for a while now. LET THE GAMES BEGIN. Jean plotting, Gambit rethinking his place inOroro's life brother or lover, Logan just being Logan Xavier holding it all together. I'm hooked Fabulous work keep going
person Teran
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jean is acting like a royal bitch and Logan really might tear Scott a new one when he finds out. I do like Scott a lot in this chapter.
person Hornet
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh I love this choas that's on the way back home I abslotuely love the talk Scott and Ororo had it was so CUTE. Gambit is turning and Scott is going to need all the allies he can get with Logan and Jean planning evil OMG I am biting my nails waiting for the next chapter with this bomb about to explode THIS IS EXCELLENT
person Spider
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was so CUTE between Scott and Ororo. Okay usually I like Jean but I don't like her in this one she has that I can get him anytime I want attitude after she has lost him. YEAH Gambit is coming around and seeing Logan as he is. I have a question The king of Pain is it Scott or Logan. what one man will do to have the woman he wants HMMMM I wonder Beautiful chapter continue with more
person karmaxp
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been almost a week will you update please
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update I am asking you with my mind