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for The Circle And The Flame

by KMac

person Nightmare
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll repeat this at the end of the next chapter, but here's my response for now...

(Dizi Quote) I love the way Jimmy is going. The only thing that seems out of place is that he hasn't spoken to his mother or Margalii about Dion, they just seemed much closer than that. Kurt knew Jimmy saw her in his dreams and it just seems that he would have gone into more detail with at least his grandmother in hopes she would have a way to help him. Then again he's a man so that's as good an explanation as any for him to do the opposite of what sounds reasonable. I normally wouldn't go into this much detail but you did ask. (/Quote)

I adore detailed comments... really, I just thrive on reader responses!! /dances...

Anyway... He did check with Margali, and she couldn't help him. He never told his mother because a) Margali knew more, and b) he knew how much it would hurt Jimaine to know of his pain. It's in the bit when he's in the garden, halway between the beginning of the chapter, and when Piotr speaks to him. Thanks for reading!
person Dizi
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way Jimmy is going. The only thing that seems out of place is that he hasn't spoken to his mother or Margalii about Dion, they just seemed much closer than that. Kurt knew Jimmy saw her in his dreams and it just seems that he would have gone into more detail with at least his grandmother in hopes she would have a way to help him. Then again he's a man so that's as good an explanation as any for him to do the opposite of what sounds reasonable. I normally wouldn't go into this much detail but you did ask.

I love the way this story is going completely. You have great characters going and I can't wait for more!
person Cody Thomas
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, new story! I've been anxiously waiting for this. Now update it soon so your loyal fans don't go mad!
person otak the canadian
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just saying that I can't wait for you to start this story. Shadow and th Kat is one of the best stories on this site and I truly look forward to this story. Viva la RAiders. Viva la Kurtty!
person dizi
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAaaaaayyyy!! I loved "Shadow and the Kat". I just read it and was about to review asking for more when here is ch1! You are sssoooo good!