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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable and very sad. You could use a beta for some minor details, but otherwise it was fairly well written.
I'd love it if you continued.
I'd love it if you continued.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I'd enjoy a sequal, however you should get a beta to spell check because there were quite a few errors