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Ooops, sorry! I didn't explain my comments very well. I understood what Jubs was doing, and the needed speed so that Logan wouldn't stop her. I was just saying the description went from spreading his legs to him being in her throat without description of her taking him into her mouth. You know, like 'she grabbed his erect cock in one hand and aimed it slightly downward. Quickly she took him past her full lips and deep into her mouth. The next thing he knew, he was deep inside her throat.' That sort of thing. Not really needed, I'm just a believer in little details. ;)

Great,great..GREAT story..I can't wait for him to "meet with"Mary jane..hmm..and since the X-women are reading this..how about a reaction from them are they shocked...or turned on the he thinks about them that way..keep up the gret work..

MDR, basically in the moment he took the beer from the nightstand and put it to his lips Jubes was making her way to him and was between his legs by the time the beer hit his lips, that's why he dropped it on the floor, her reaction startled him. See what I mean

To MDR: I see what you mean now, ignore first message. Jubilee is basically on the stalking side and she wasn't giving Logan the chance to react to her being down on her knees so she just went right for it, there really isn't any room for an in-between, she just took her shot. Get me now?

HEy just thought I'd let you know that I'm enjoying this story as much as your other one( nice Kurt and Kitty by the way , What's Kurt up to?) I just wish you had the reactions of the women reading the " LOgan Sanction" like you do in the other but it's still great anyways. thank you, Otak

Sweet! One little complaint about page 4 though. Go back and flesh out the part where Jubs goes down on Logan in the beginning. It seemed to jump from licking a drop of beer to having his dick in her throat with no in-between. Black Widow might be very nice. In the Wolverine comic it was shown that Logan saved Natasha from some Nazis 50 years ago when she was a child. She considers him like an uncle. But perhaps she has long had a crush on him, and has now decided to provoke him into taking her? Course, she might have a different history in this universe, I don't know.

Seeing as how I am a huge rolo lover (obviously) chapter three was delightful. I need a fan to read this to begin with, but pairing Logan and Ororo...hoo, I may need a tub of ice and a cold shower. Nicely done.

Oh god how i love logan stories. Especially when it is written the way i picture him to be. I mean he does seem like the kind of guy just to take what he wants. Not that there would be a lot of taking going on, i mean who would say no? I can't wait to see what else he get into!

I really love this story and your other one. I was hoping you could do an Ororo/Logan one please. Thanks!

Well...I liked more the idea of wolverine and the others, not only wolverine fantasies...