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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm exceedingly glad that Ro is not so easily conquered. Logan needs a woman that can matchhim. ;)
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I like how the dominant Logan kinda showed up again at the end where he essentially told her what to wear, and she put it on without really thinking about it. Hmmm, it might be interesting if he seduces her so completly that she decides to just become his, join his wildness, and proceeds to facilitate and/or join in his seductions of the girls reading his journal. It might also be interesting if Jubilee seduces Kitty, perhaps thinking about setting up her own lil threesome between she, Kitty, and Logan
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see where the date goes. And Scott...pervert. LOL.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooooo!!! I love this fic ...genius!!! So whats next for these two I love the idea of a Rolo its great just great.Hey what about who's next are u pairing logan with some one else if u are please do a psylocke/logan its so damn rare to see those two together please please pretty please ....oh update soon please lol later
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Obviously I am a HUGE Ororo/Logan shipper, and I have to tell you I like how you incorporated the idea that Wolverine has no qualms about fucking the other women in his diary, but with Ororo it's different. I think that is so true of their relationship. If any two people belong together--it's them, and the visual of them together...whoo. I can't wait to read more. Hopefully LOTS more rolo. Good job. Very steamy, and the outdoors in the rain...nice touch!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I love itmso much. I hope you keep it up.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Logan's a frickin pimp in this fic! ^^ Update soon!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been a big Wolverine fan since ... the 1980s? Oof. I feel old. That being said, this is a good piece of light reading. Other readers have commented on things that need to be fixed in the text, and I do not feel the need to repeat those comments, but I am going to tell you what I like and dislike about the story.
The big thing is that Wolverine has a certain image as a repressed hornball, and your story plays out one way that he might unleash that from time to time. What he initially says is very true: He is almost always surrounded by extremely attractive young women! No one is going to blame him for having bad thoughts ... except Cyclops, perhaps, but that is another story. I admit that I do have a hard time picturing Wolverine as any kind of writer, but he did know Ernest Hemingway during World War II, so he might have picked up a lesson or two from him. Who can really say?
One thing that made me laugh: Putting the classic comment ― you know the one ― at the end of each installment. Normally, when Wolverine says that, it is because he is getting into a fight, not because he is macking on one of his teammates, but ... there is no reason he could not be good at that, too. Do not forget the original ending to the quote, though: “... and what I do ain't very nice.”
The pairings cover the entire history of Wolverine as a key member of the X-Men, including his two female 'sidekicks', Kitty Pryde and Jubilee. (I, myself, am a fan of Wolverine / adult Jubilee, and it is good to see that she has been included.) The only female that strikes me as odd is Rogue, since you claim that she is sixteen. In the movie version of X-Men, yes, that is true, but the Rogue from the comics ― since most of your story is based on that ― is in her late 20s or early 30s. This is not a problem, just a small oddity that I saw.
Anyway, like other readers, I look forward to seeing where the story goes. Obviously, Logan is not going to get away with having this dirty journal of his, and the reaction of the female characters is going to be interesting. Again, this is a good story for light reading. If I were in your position, I would tweak the grammar a little bit, but it is all in good fun. Keep posting! This story could go any number of ways.
The big thing is that Wolverine has a certain image as a repressed hornball, and your story plays out one way that he might unleash that from time to time. What he initially says is very true: He is almost always surrounded by extremely attractive young women! No one is going to blame him for having bad thoughts ... except Cyclops, perhaps, but that is another story. I admit that I do have a hard time picturing Wolverine as any kind of writer, but he did know Ernest Hemingway during World War II, so he might have picked up a lesson or two from him. Who can really say?
One thing that made me laugh: Putting the classic comment ― you know the one ― at the end of each installment. Normally, when Wolverine says that, it is because he is getting into a fight, not because he is macking on one of his teammates, but ... there is no reason he could not be good at that, too. Do not forget the original ending to the quote, though: “... and what I do ain't very nice.”
The pairings cover the entire history of Wolverine as a key member of the X-Men, including his two female 'sidekicks', Kitty Pryde and Jubilee. (I, myself, am a fan of Wolverine / adult Jubilee, and it is good to see that she has been included.) The only female that strikes me as odd is Rogue, since you claim that she is sixteen. In the movie version of X-Men, yes, that is true, but the Rogue from the comics ― since most of your story is based on that ― is in her late 20s or early 30s. This is not a problem, just a small oddity that I saw.
Anyway, like other readers, I look forward to seeing where the story goes. Obviously, Logan is not going to get away with having this dirty journal of his, and the reaction of the female characters is going to be interesting. Again, this is a good story for light reading. If I were in your position, I would tweak the grammar a little bit, but it is all in good fun. Keep posting! This story could go any number of ways.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And uh.. how do the X-gals REACT to reading all these things anyway? Does Logan know they found the book?
Are they going to try and make any of these fantasy's come true?
Just a thought.
Are they going to try and make any of these fantasy's come true?
Just a thought.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I was coming to that. I was letting the girls read a few entries before they said anything, as far as Logan finding them with the book I haven't yet decided how I'm gonna do that. There response will be after page five.