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for Unchained Instinct ( Complete)

by Julia

person definite_effervescence
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!

*sniffle* Aw, poor Kurt. I knew his parents wouldn't be understanding, at least not at first, but it just broke my heart to see Kurt have to go through that. *hugs Kurt until he turns even more blue*

Eeep! What's Mystique doing to poor Cassie?! If anything, Cassie aided her son in his recovery, and that should at least make Mystique somewhat grateful...well, she did say she was kind of thankful. I only hope she didn't stuff Cassie into a garbage bag and lock her in a storage facility. *shudder* That would be waaaay scary. Nicely done orchestrating Mystique vying emotions...anger to regret to pain...all for her son...or so she'd like to think she's doing Kurt a favor.

Oh, Kurt. Don't feel bad!

How sweet...Logan trying to do something nice for Kurt. Sharing a room, eh? Should prove to be interesting. I enjoyed the way you portrayed the extent and depth of tenderness they feel for one another. It helps to reinforce their loving relationship.

Once more, well done, and I greatly look forward with anticipation to the upcoming chapters...I have the worst feeling that things aren't likely to get better just yet...

definite effervescence ^__^
person Dina
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've finally read the first ten chapters! I love them. A bit strange after In Fear of, this romantic (dare I say fluffy?) starting, though the trouble with Mystiqe promises many problems for the boys, and even more blinking-back-tears, nail-biteing reading time for me. Oh, and I'm so in love with Logan.
person definite effervescence
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great four chapters...they truly fly by all too quickly. The tension is certainly rising, and I am on pins and needles just wondering how Kurt is going to break this all to his parents...I suppose I shall have to wait and see.

Until then...wonderful work.

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person rAgE
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeiiii! Sequel! Those 12 chapters flew by too fast ; ;
This is looking great so far, more Kurt and Logan goodness :3
And once again, beautiful work on keeping the characters as much like themselves as possible under the circumstances.
Write more soon? ; ; it's addicting.
person jacki
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Greetings!

Wow, I can't believe I just happened to stumble across this. I read "In Fear of Three Little Words" ages ago (sorry for never having the chance to leave you words of praise and encouragement)...I was delighted to see that you are writing a sequel. What I've read so far is fantastic, and it remains true to the wonderful quality of writing you presented with your first fic. I remain truly jealous of your excellent grasp and understanding of these characters. You make everything work, without disrupting personalities or happenings in the show. I tip my hat to you!

I truly look forward to reading more...keep up the great work!

definite effervescence ^__^
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited! I printed it out, so I can read it in every spare minutes I got:D I'll wirte more when I'm thorugh it.