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for Unchained Instinct ( Complete)

by Julia

person Littlest Coyote
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Came back to re-read In Fear Of and found this! *SQUEE* Please, oh please, write more! It was In Fear Of that got me interested in Logan/Kurt slash in the first place. Evil you. ^.^
person Chinmoku
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You manage to capture the characters quite well, though I still cringe whenever Logan says 'sweetheart'. It's just so strange! Though Logan isn't my favourite character at all, but Kurt more than makes up for him. My only criticism would be the strange shifts in the story. Ten pages of gore and torture, followed by ten pages of fluff. But I had this problem with 'In Fear of...' as well. I know this whole thing revolves around love, and beating all odds, and a fair amount of psychoanalysis (I imagine you as Cassie - analysing all the characters up close and personal, but keeping your distance as well), but I can't fit torture into all this - at least not the amount you did. But since you make it better in the end, I forgive you. The problem with so much torture, for me, is like in this story, when Mystique had Logan, I had to skip about five chapters, because the stuff happening back at the Institute wasn't totally relevant, or up to par with the real conflict. At least to me.

Ok, done rambling. Keep up the good work.

One thing: Logan saying 'darling' I can handle, for some reason... I don't know why... :P
person Jaden
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In regards to chapters 77 and 78...whoa and whoa as in WOW. They're really good and, for lack of a better word, hot. It's good that Logan got the chance to open up and recover a little. Mystique better not ruin it too much. Cya

J_
person Jaden
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In regards to chapters 77 and 78...whoa and whoa as in WOW. They're really good and, for lack of a better word, hot. It's good that Logan got the chance to open up and recover a little. Mystique better not ruin it too much. Cya

J_
person Dina
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could I not love the hot sex? I adore it:D And just you know: I can no longer watch this show without giggling like mad whenever Kurt or Logan apperars, thanks to you;)
person Dina
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed these last few chapters! The scene in the bar was priceless, the sex hot, tha angst touching and heart gripping. What more can a girl ask? Only for Gambit, with whom I'm head over heels in love.
person Jaden
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arg, Logan! That witch is right next to you! lol Good update, I hope Logan and Kurt get over the rough patch they're going through without too much trouble.

J_
person Dina
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Mystique is still here... I should have expected her. *sighs* I don't mind if you torture the boys some more (and with them me) but don't forget about the Happy End!
person Jaden
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update, sounds like Mystique is up to no good again. I hope Logan wakes up soon and realizes how important Kurt really is.

J_
person Dina
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Kurt didn't let Logan go. I'm rather satisfied with him. And you:)