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for Unchained Instinct ( Complete)

by Julia

schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I started reading In Fear of Three Little Words a couple of months ago. Actually, it was the third X-men fanfic I've ever read and loved. And, I've read a lot of fanfics! After reading IFoTLW, I was all "WOW!OMGCOOL!" Then, I went to your profile and was shocked and thrilled to see a sequel to it. Quickly, I canceled what I had to do for the evening to read. I got so caught up with it that I actually stood up until 4 o clock in the morning. I have to say, I was going about my daily chores and errands thinking about what was going to happen next. I /needed/ to know! Yes, I know, I'm weird...but your story is /that/ good. It's been about a month since I've last been on Adultfanfiction.net so I went to your story and thought you had a low amount of reviews. Sadly, I never made an account for the website...

And for you...I did. And, bam! Here's my review. I want to add more about how your story moved me but...I think it'll be to long and I don't want to bore you by going in detail about how you kept the character's personalities, the way the dialog is smooth and does not sound fake, or how I love how Kurt and Logan go good together, I've never thought of that pairing but dang...I should have...Yeah, you're probably bored already...

So, um update...I love you(your story) and byebye.
person yessire
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading for three days. I made it through the fist story to the second and now I'm done. What will I do I'll actully have to talk to my family and I can't have that please write more. lots more.

Oh and if I can put in a bid, that blue bitch has to die and soon. It would be fun for her to see that instead of letting the beast out in Logan (who she totally is in love with and wants for herself) that she has let the best out in Kurt and he is fine with that as long as it means keeping his family and man safe from her evil ass.
person Ahchacha
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is the blue woman gonna rape Pietro in a man form anytime soon? *goes crazy from anticipation* XD
person Littlest Coyote
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had all but given up on AFF and here it is back up! Yay! And better yet, you're back to writing!! Double yay!! Your story was the first I've read since coming back and now I have to be a brat and say MORE!! Yes please!
person ZombieDuke
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0_0!!!
My god, you updated this monster!!! *does the insane/joyful/hamster happy dance* It has been waaay to long but I'm glad to see your still writing!
Keep it going!^__~V
person Jaden
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, excellent update. I'm really glad that the story isn't over yet. Good work with the Rogue and Gambit parts. I like that the whole story isn't just revolving around two characters and a villain or two. It gives the story more depth.
Keep up the good work.

J_
person BIGHUGEFANOFYOSTORIES! <3
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY YOU'RE ALIVE! >=D I thought you like... quit the story ._. SO GLAD YOU'RE BACK! ^.^
person Jaden
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I was hoping that this story would be updated again. I'm going to go read and review later.

J_
person Dendey
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww! This Chapter was sooo sweet again! Just like the one before! I really liked the moments in which Logan could find some solace in the mountains to ease his pained soul. The little waterfall sounded like it was pulled out of a dream, it seemed so tranquil.
Great work! Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update! Dankeschoen!