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for Unchained Instinct ( Complete)

by Julia

person Gabe
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you still watch these reviews, but I have to say, this and the story before it are some of the very best fanfiction I have ever read. If it was a book, I wouldn't have been able to put it down. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us!
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Unchained Instinct and In Fear of Three Words are the most beautifully written fanfiction I have ever read. The way that the paragraphs were constructed and the way that the words were used was so fantastically done and I couldn't be more obsessed with the stories that you have written.

Unlike a lot of my friends, I didn't grow up with a lot of comics, so as I start to really get back into the worlds of Marvel and DC Comics, it really helps to have stories solidify what I know of a certain character. And your stories are no exception. I have learned so much about the X-men characters in your stories and have fallen so much more in love with the ones I already had a knack for. Kurt especially. I have such a love of this character and I adore the way that you wrote him. And even with his tormented moments, you did such a great job of keeping them in character while still adding your own little spin on their personality.

As for the pairing of Logan and Kurt, what can I say, I truly ship them now. I adore the backstory that you've given them and whenever I find pictures of them online, they are instantly saved. They are such a beautiful couple and I applaud the way that you've utilized their personalities.

Thank you for writing these two stories and I truly hope that you never give up writing <3

--HereticalRunes
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Once again, a very good story. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it (a lot). Thank you very much.
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I have read both your stories from beginning to end and they are amazing. In fact these stories actually inspired me to start writing my own! So thanks for the excellent stories. Do you plan on writing any others? If so I would be more then willing to help in any way possible. Anyway thanks again for the excellent stories you are a very talented author and I hope my writing talent can reach yours one day.
person Jags
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. AWESOME! keep up the good work
person LoveDark
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, it took me a full week to read all of that and admittedly some it was disturbing. Even you managed to capture these characters personalities on a level far greater than anyone I've seen thus far. You my friend, are a truly talented writer and gotta say I usually never read anything this long but what can I say this story just demanded my attention.

Also if there's to be a sequel, seeing as how this ended; I'll most certainly be waiting anxiously, til then ;-)
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dear gods that last bit with Mystique made my skin crawl. I pray it is many and many decades, (like 9) before she manages to find a way out of there. This was a fantastic story, beginning to end, and the fact that the sequel is twice the length of the original just makes me even happier because I just got to enjoy it that much longer. is there yet another story in the works? I'd like to see Kurt and Logan actually manage to find their happy ending.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I was afraid u had stopped working on this! I cant even put into words how i feel right now. So happy that its been updated... So sad its the ending... SO happy finaly knowing how it was to end... So mad at this and that, and smileing over this and that to.... My biggie right now.... The way it ended.... Is there..... More to come?????!!!!!!! God that would be so perfect!!!!!!!!!!!! Honestly u should be writing novels for a living, cause I would buy all of ur work for sure. My friends and I are going to have an aim meeting now and talk about this update. (Like we do after every update for our fac stories.) Would it be to much for me to hope for a trigilty??? Well Ive talked way to long, just wanted to say how much I LOVE ur stories, writing style, and well, u period lol.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this series and have followed it from the beginning. I even went back and reviewed when you were kidnapped by those aliens. I am so glad that you finished the stories, but it did seem a bit rushed. Are you planning on continuing with this particular series or are you going to start a new project?
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. please keep writing, it makes me smile alot...;)