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for An Angel's Tears

by Spook101

person Lauren Marcus
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god! Your story is awesome! I've seen that sort of mutant power done before, but never as well as here! I like Gabriel a lot. Could we have an extended scene with Gabriel and Kurt? And please don't abandon this story! Keep writing, it's really good!
person chalire_lostsoul
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing ^_^ A really good fanfic so far, I'm liking that you used Remy in this (Remy is <3) nad the story line and use of characters have all been great. Perhaps you could use the name Dante? He's one of my favourite characters in the fanfics I do and well, I could see him fitting in with this well. He's kinda dark, kinda twisted..but he's got a heart...him and Gabriel would get on well if he trusted him.. *thinks* Anyways ^_^ keep up the good work!
person Snoopy
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot *ish loving the random smuttyness*
this story is hell hot please keep up the most excellent work
[insert flattering comment here]
*wants to see the sister beat logan up*
now if we could fit toad in here somewhere
*thinx about that tongue*.......
hehehe j/k
nah spike would be better hehe
*wanders off in random direction* oh yeah FURRYS RULE
person Raven & Rayn
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this story is AMAZING! We personally think you should add some Scott and Bobby action. >> We also think John ( Pyro ) Should do a fire vs ice sex scene with bobby. It would be shmexiness! ^^ ( Raven ) I'm great when it comes to writing roleplay scenes so sned me an e-mail if y need advice
^.~ *hits Raven outside the head with a toothpick* ;-; Ow ( Rayn ) Anywhoooooo We hope you continue this story and We just have 1 question. Why don't you give kurt his whole german accent? D: Well you still get a 5 outta 5 in our book books ^^ We'll send more reviews!

Raven & Rayn
person Alcyone
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I really enjoyed the premise and the Logan/Gabriel dynamic is sexamalicious. The writing has no glaring faults and the storyline has continuity and is easy to follow. Keep it up, I'm eagerly awaiting more chapters.
person MeLaiya
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving it, update soon
person Petrez
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where's the godamn smut? You keep promising it but it NEVER COMES!!! (Pun completely and utterly intened ~_^) Other then t\you horrible lies and empty promises I like it. EMPTY PROMISES!!!
person Kaizer
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write.... more.. now!

-cough-
person TheRedeemer
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far!! Gabe's power reminds me of Remmy's charm power gone wild. Keep up the god work!
person Desperate
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!! That was great!

You need to hurry and get the next chapter out!