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by greeneyelove

person Ashnan
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good too. See, I knew I didn't have time to review the other in length. Had to get to this one.

I am always glad to see Jean not being everyone's princess. Don't worry about her dying, she'll just come back. That tart just won't stay dead. As a fellow comic fan said, "There wasn't even time for grass to grow on her grave before that harpy came back."

You mentioned Jean had her hands all over Logan. Glad someone else noticed. HER hands were on him. She was always caressing to check his wounds. If I woke up with the doctor running his hands on me in the same manner she did, there would be a sexual assult charge on his ass. Plus, did you notice that everytime Jean moved, she moved slowly. X1, walking into the professors office, she had to glide. X2, Storm comes down the stairs at a normal pace, but Jean has to slowly desend.

Enough ranting. Love your work. Write more!