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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The ending kind of blew me away, Bobby and John, that was a shocker. I started laghing. You did good again.
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez, you had another story waiting for me to read and I wasted my time on that last review. Okay, this was great too. Do you ever write a crappy story, cause you are throwing the curve way off for the rest of us.
"God had made this perfect thing and naturally, he didn’t want anyone who was not perfect to touch it and ruin it." That is just sweet.
I can just imagine the look on Logan's face when Bobby told him to get his act together.
Actually, there are alot of lines from your story I'd like to quoted and tell you how wonderful they are, but I won't. It'd be one long review if I did.
Love your stuff. Write More!
"God had made this perfect thing and naturally, he didn’t want anyone who was not perfect to touch it and ruin it." That is just sweet.
I can just imagine the look on Logan's face when Bobby told him to get his act together.
Actually, there are alot of lines from your story I'd like to quoted and tell you how wonderful they are, but I won't. It'd be one long review if I did.
Love your stuff. Write More!