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Didn't see much requests for our resident jokester so i thought of the following

Iceman/Storm
Iceman/Emma/Jean
Iceman/Psylocke
Iceman/Ms. Marvel/She-Hulk (Hey you had Banner get some, why not them?)

One of the most innovative and attractive concepts for x-men fanfiction I've ever come across.
Brings all number of uncommon but appealing pairings to mind...

Sebastian Shaw, Emma Frost and Tessa/Sage
Brian and Betsy Braddock
Magneto and Kitty
Wanda and Lorna

the possibilities are endless.

hi I couldnt help but read this story again
I love it but could u add more
I have a idea could u put Storm w/ Angel
its so unexpected add more to your story

hi I couldnt help but read this story again
I love it but could u add more
I have a idea could u put Storm w/ Angel
its so unexpected add more to your story

Girl,that story was spicy, hot,sexy and funnny
Please write more, I dont know u but you must be a wonderful writer.
ohh, and can u please write one about Storm and Kurt or even Remy

Awesome!!!

Please do another Sabretooth/Rogue chapter but this time for they alone.


And yeah, a Psylocke/Gambit would be really hot too

Update soon

Yay! *cheers* Such fun!

How about Psylocke/Gambit; or Polaris/Bishop?

From the author:
First if you're gonna give me advice don't do that anonymous stuff...I hate it. Don't be afaid to tell me who you are, I value opinion even this one.

Second when they 'fixed' this site they messed up alot of my chapters and others too, to the point they made no sense I had to redo a whole page. I spell check as I go..Office(Word)is all I use, their are still chps I still have to fix...so again, not my fault (and sometimes the program isn't that much help either).

Third and most important....that's the point to this story...you're suppose to think it's one person but it turns out to be another, it's a diary remember..the person writing is suppose to be secret until the end. I give hints about who it COULD be, not who it actually is, where's the fun in that ANON?...it's also a guessing game as you go along for the reader...some people caught on to that. Fourth, I am glad u liked it and I will continue when I have time to and fix what was really messed up, even the simplest of things and thanx for what you said, now how 'bout your stuff so I can give my 2 cents.

Fifth...a Magneto chapter is NO problem and a Storm/Professor I can do too...where ya been figgy??!!!

Dude, please do a Magneto chapter, and a Storm/Professor chapter would be really hot too! ;0)

This is a good idea, but written poorly. It's often hard to follow who you have in mind for the fantasies. When the men are reading they blurt out a name in surprise, but nothing in the fantasy gives any hints, so how do they know? And there were some fantasies that were left completely a mystery. Perhaps labelling who the fantasies are about like what you did for Rogue's entry for Cain Marko, Victor Creed and Hank McCoy.

There's grammatical errors throughout the story but I am way too lazy to email corrections. My suggestion is to invest in Microsoft Office where spelling errors, incorrect punctuation and fragmented sentences are pointed out by the program; or at least download a free spellcheck program; or find a willing beta.

Also, you may not be aware of this, but you double posted the wolf!Scott chapter.

This is not a flame, by the way. I did like the idea of the story. There could be potential to this story if the writing were cleaned up.

Looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapters!