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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like your story so far please let me know when you update again the email is twilightseer08@aol.com thank you please update soon
ps there are some french words you used that i was wondering what they mean if you can let me know i'd be much appreciative thank you
ps there are some french words you used that i was wondering what they mean if you can let me know i'd be much appreciative thank you
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I hope whatever troubles are coming your way are not too bad and can be cleared up soon! Hope to read more soon!
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May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. Good stuff! Really good stuff! Had a deep flush creepin right down to my toes! But I cant wait for more! Please update soon!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!
the narrarator is straight forward in describeing what it is that's going on, without cutting the mental image.
Great concept, very good smut plot, while also stepping back to see the ripples of character reactions (which have been dead-on thus far),
I'm aching to see what Beast has planned, Do hurry!
respectfully,
Lamenthatic
the narrarator is straight forward in describeing what it is that's going on, without cutting the mental image.
Great concept, very good smut plot, while also stepping back to see the ripples of character reactions (which have been dead-on thus far),
I'm aching to see what Beast has planned, Do hurry!
respectfully,
Lamenthatic
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very wonderful story, if not frightening. Just the thought of someone who had basically no emotion; no love, lust, hate, sadness...it's just sad. I hope you write more. It was a very good piece.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated! I really like what you're doing with this story. Great job!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. More please :)
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting beginning: slow, but promissing. It's always best to place every character in place before starting the action.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved how Hank resisted temptation. It just makes you want to see what happens next time she'll be in for a check-up.