rate_review Reviews

Great story and hot as hell, but I have one major complaint: It WAS TOO EFFING SHORT! There was some build but the climax came and went so quickly I didn't even know it had happened! Here's a little trick. If in one paragraph you've just summarized a whole scene, you're moving too quick. Slow down, take the time to write out the character's emotions, thoughts, what they are feeling (both physically and emotionally) and you'll make your readers happy ^_^

ooooo yummy !!

Ain't feral love grand :D

XLF

really liked this, victor is my favorite and you write him well ,it was good to have the other characters as well. :)

Heat index outside: 104. Heat index inside: off the charts. Damn! You're doing great, girl, keep them coming!

You just had to go there didn't you!:) Two years... good god that poor girl will be lucky if she won't need reconstructive surgery. And hearing the 'f' word fall from her innocent littel lips was an absolute shock! The up against the wall part wasn't though>:) Nice prologue!

Very hot, kid. I like that Jubes and Wolvie were affected by what Jessie and Vic did.

Man that was good. Having that man wait for so long, so conflicted, wish I was her then again....very very nice, will you continue?