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for One-Way Ticket On A Runaway Train

by Karen

person Karen
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops, you're right - MarzBar - I added the extra 'vous'. Although I did have it correct when I used it in "Next Stop, The Twilight Zone". *g* Thanks for pointing that out because I hate having mistakes in my stories - even little ones that most people wouldn't notice. I'm still finding minor boo-boos - like missing commas or missing apostrophes (that should be used with 'cause)

Karen
person MarzBar
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely wedding.

P.S. You need to change je t'aime vous to je t'aime.
person MarzBar
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see the girls having fun and no angst for awhile.
person Manders the Panders
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As much as I like this what ABout Jubliee? Poor girl around all these horny toads don't she get atleast some action?
person MarzBar
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Entertaining trip to the strip club! Happy to see they have a clue about Jean. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad the four of them are having a nice, hot vacation. When do they get some justice?
person MarzBar
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good that Rogue and Scott are recovering from the horror. What will it take to break Jean?
person MarzBar
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did Jean hire Sabretooth to come to the mansion and hurt Rogue and kill Scott's baby? If Logan finds out, I don't give her good odds for staying alive.
person MarzBar
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Rogue remembers about how the bitch did NOT help her or the baby. It's time she went away. More please.
person Alex
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's great to see this story here, really love how you put it together. But i got to admit, this chapter always makes me cry.
Keep up the excellent writing.