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for Under Her Spell

by Marvelover

person Rololover1
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I'm in a sweat and grinning like an idiot. I rarely find a goos strong Ororo and even more rare is a good Ro-Vic pairing. Well done! I'm off to take a cold shower!!
person myladymystere
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a great read !!!! a good pairing that is not done often and very sexy writting ,the whole pole/stripping thing a well thought idea.i would just gently suggest a proof read before posting -some errors interrupted the flow ...but i really hope you keep going !!! another chapter for sure and i would be interested to see you do other pairings :)
person stormfan
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoooHHhhh!! That was *fabulous!* I've always been intrigued by the dynamic between these two - what a great take on it! I love the confident, sexy Storm and a Victor with a personality ... but not such a softie that he's out of character. Great job! Hope to see more!