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November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Never rated any of the stories, but I HAD to tell you that this was an OUTSTANDING job. Loved the ending and how Marie didn't let Laurie's insane play doubt her man. Nice.
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Over all I enjoyed it. Not many people AU M/L stories. When I review I try and be constuctive so here it goes. First of all the erotic sceence where veri enjoyable also although I usualy think of Logan as more guarded in his emotions and less open you tweeked him to fit his position yet not seem totaly outof character so good job there. I did feel the story was a bit rushed and compact but I believ you said this was your first so good starting point. Also you lacked any realy conflict. Marie walking in on Laurie and Logan would have been the perfect place to create the miss understanding between them for a chapter or so. This is what makes readers hang on to the edge of there seats. I know it's not enjoyable to make your characters suffer but it realy makes the happy ending all the happier. Overall great job you had me drooling. I want to reiterate this is not a flame just constructive critisism. And I apologise for my bad spelling and grammer I'm on my iPod.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've only read half the first chapter and love it already.
I just wanted to pause mid-way to tell you that the fact you have given Marie a Kitten called "Rogue" in the story is really cute, cos as I'm reading this I'm sitting with my kitten "Logan" asleep in my lap XD
Just thought I'd tell ya =D
*And back to the fic Lol*
=3
I just wanted to pause mid-way to tell you that the fact you have given Marie a Kitten called "Rogue" in the story is really cute, cos as I'm reading this I'm sitting with my kitten "Logan" asleep in my lap XD
Just thought I'd tell ya =D
*And back to the fic Lol*
=3
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. So touching, heartwrenching and emotional but it was great! I'm definitely going to be reading it again!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely story.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, dreamy wedding.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice baby WAFF with a touch of nice smut. More please.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Mr. Wing Wang? This is definitely AU. More soon please.
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oopsies, Logan is gonna be in big trouble. Please make it so Marie gets the full story and doesn't blow off and break of the engagement, I mean come on even Marie couldn't be that retarted to be engaged to a guy and then not trust him. Anyway, update soon, and maybe make the chapters longer.
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK!! Evil cliffie! Which one of them will Marie clobber? More soon please.