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Hopefully u will add more chapters to this story it sounds like an interesting start to a good story so keep it up and hope to read more of this later

Really, really I like it. Very well written.

This website needs more good Scott/Jean stories. Thanks for writing one. :)

Aww, that was such a sweet fic. *happy sigh*

Wow! Great fic you have here! It was really well written and really well done. I love Scott/Jean stories and I think they are WAY too scarce on this site. That's why I've been writing a fic lately that has major Scott/Jean as well and it's good to see someone writing one as well. You made everything sound very believable and you did an excellent job capturing their inner thoughts. Both Scott and Jean were in character and not skewwed as they so often are by bias writers who think they're too goody goody when in reality that's far from the truth. This fic combined a great deal of humor, romance, and overall cuteness and I applaude you for it! Will there be another chapter? I really hope so! If not, this is still a most excellent fic and I give this my absolute highest rating! Great job and keep up the great work!

Very nice, will there be a more to this? I kind of hope so like how things will go or if someone sees her coming out of his room like that not to mention what just happened last night as well. I hope so.