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by dizi

person Ashley
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know i really enjoy our stories. I began readind them on fanfiction.net and then here, you have some talent, not to mention this story centered on my three favorite x-men.
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very hard to swallow in the first chapter but, I'm not one to talk. From my own trauma, I don't think sex should be used to fix rape, and not by two or three people. Rape is very personal and tends to make the victim feel like a freak, you've captured that flawlessly. I don't totally disagree but, I don't fully agree either with the way it was handled. I've always thought Logan was fierce with danger but gentle with broken persons. Remy is sex, yes, but I guess I need to read more to understand where you're going with this. This is good so, don't let me deter you from anything. Please continue.
person Elizabeth Robbins
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do so like this story. Remy and Logan tag team sex. Lucky girl.
person Trynia Merin
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You presented a nice contrast between Remy and Logan in terms of their satisfying Jenny's needs. Gambit always struck me as a 'romance' sort and Logan as a more 'get to the point' kind of lover. Seeing them helping her in a two on one was intriguing. I especially enjoyed their different ways of making her feel validated to help overcome her abuse, and make her realize sex was something to be enjoyed. There's just something erotic about Logan and Remy in 'protector' mode that I can't resist.

I would be very intrested in seeing another chapter.
person Loganlover4ever
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Showing the softer side of Logan and the patience of Remy to a girl who really needed it, I love this story very inspiring for those who don't think they're sexy in any way. If ya do another chapter, let's see how Jenny's ego has boosted from the experience and let her roam around Logan and Remy for a while. Just a suggestion.
person Jaenelle Angelline
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Second chapter? Of course. This one is just begging for another chapter. Now that Jenny's gotten over her fear of the male touch, she'll probably get curious enough to wonder what getting to home base will feel like. This was only third base! Maybe one of the other X-Women could 'help her out', explaining the use of a dildo and helping her choose gradually larger and larger sizes until she's stretched out enough that she can accomodate someone inside her...like, oh, Kurt...! ;)
Just a suggestion!
Amanda
person raxx7
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it.it was a great story of desire and the love between special friends.i would like to read the next chapter.keep going you're doing a great job of telling a difficult story line with a gentle but sensual touch.also there are not enough good smut out there with one girl and two guys-- and what guys!!!! raxx7
person Elizabeth Robbins
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where do I sign up for one of those nights? Remy and Logan together? My kind of action. Loved this story.
person draelynn
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just start pimpin' those boys out as a tag team! I'll be your best customer. But in the mean time, they have some work to do. I thought your treatment of the damaged Jenny was sensitive. My only objection was the 'F' word. These two friends really care for her and are trying to help. Maybe the 'F' word is a bit to vulgar for what they are trying to do. Other than that - BRAVO!
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I noticed no one had reveiwed yet, and boy do I know how that feels! so I decided to drop in. The story was hot, Remy & Logan; whew! As it happens it's not really my thing so I didn't drop dead adore it, but from a general standpoint; very HOT, and good too.