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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the Remy/antarctica story line. I can see where you are going with this story and I'm along for the ride! I happen to be a big L/R shipper therefore my critique will be skewed but you will know why... I think Logan's feeling for Remy are a bit abrupt. Logan always seems like a ladies man to me. So, I guess I'm looking for a bit more soul searching on his part to rectify his attraction to Remy. If you were only going for a slashy little romp then hey, who cares! But you took the time and poured great detail into the 'Ro and Logan against everyone else' dynamic. I guess I was looking for that same detail in Logan's new found interest. Great start!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I need more.. I want more. ... please!!!