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for Damned

by Jemisard

person raxx7
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
liked how you lead into the story, well written with a twist nobody has explored--but should!!
person draelynn
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! I never saw that coming! Poor Cable... so conflicted. But who wouldn't be! Love the shock value. You handled the mystery quite well. At the end all I could say was DAMNNNNN! LOL! Any plans for future installments? This has such great potential to be angsty and twisted and sick and wonderful. Although it reads just fine as a one shot. I'll go pick my jaw up now. Thanks. Haven't been blindsided like that in a LONG time.
person jaygoose
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write X-Men fics too! I used to. But then I realized how bad I sucked at them. I got one Pyro fic I'm kinda proud of. I might post it here one day. *shrugs* Anyway, I really like this. The only thing is that I can't remember who Nathan is. *pulls out hair*