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for Raven's Gratitude

by cyndrarae

schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now, I dont read much fanfiction but when I do and find something that I like, I take the time to write a little comment to show the author some well deserved appreciation.

Truthfully, I've never really been one for X-Men fanfiction, my being an author as well, and in a completely different fandom at that, I have my own stories to focus on... but this time I wanted something else. And guess what? I found exactly what I was looking for. I'm very happy that I came across this story of yours. If you but aside pure technical skills like the excellent grammar and spelling, this story is beautifully written och very sensual. I like how you portrayed Mystique as someone with a heart rather than the downright evil bitch some tend to write her off as, and your Wolverine is absolutely wonderful. I greatly enjoyed reading this work and I have to be honest and admit that I've even saved it on my laptop for future rereading.

Thank you very much for writing this piece and sharing it with us grateful readers.

Izumi
person Jags
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was very nice. bravo
person anakingirl05
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was awesome. I am newly hooked on XMen and find myself looking for, and not finding, much that is good to read. This however, was amazing, just what I was looking for. I am a huge fan of slash, but for some reason I don't like most of the Scott/Logan story lines...This however was sheer perfection adding Mystyique like that was just the right touch.

And you have quite a way with Logan's words and actions, I could almost hear his words in my head. Great job!! I really loved it!!
person Tartlet McNawty
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant! How can something so sexy tug at my heart like that? You rock!
person hollie
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this. i feel so sorry for logan though, scott needs to snap out of it and get a clue
person Patricia16
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting U love it