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by smuttykitty

person Stormkpr
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! You wrote Bobby and JP very, very well. The sex was hot and the characters were spot on. A perfect glimpse of a 100% believable scene. Excellent.
person Saphirephoenix
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read several of your stories and enjoyed all of them. I love how you point out the differences between the two of them, but still allow them to have a good time. Keep them coming! (I meant the stories.)
person Polka dot
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Bobby is the one who got screwed. The whole suitcase thing I mean. He didn't win that at all.
person Stranj100
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I read one of your JP/Bobby fics, it makes me yearn for it in canon. They could one the greatest couple's in comics if the writers would let it happen. *sigh*
person Kalia
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one,think about the journey and the vacation too.You can write them