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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30
God, I hope they survive!
Poor Jean. Scott is bearing the brunt of theirs attacks, but she's letting loose her rage.
And tomorrow they'll meet Sarah and Paul. What fun... By the way, will the twins appear?
I wish they can overwhelm the reluctance from her family.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25
Well, that was a funny chapter. And a good way of celebrating. I think you succeeded in satisfying all fans of the pairings.
Poor Betsy. Pass that night of the year alone... that is very sad... It isn't a wonder she's so depressed.
By the way... Allison? Like in Allison Blaire, Dazzler? She was a nice character. And thankfully she's right now in Limbo so nobody has screwed her... until someone thinks of tying the loose end Lobdell left, at least... which can not happen soon.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26
Oh, my. What confrontation. It really reminded me from the comics, except it was more explosive. Which is logical, thinking that Betsy was reaching her boiling point.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Lord! This SO rocks!
The chat between Jean and Betsy was really touching. And the sex scene was really great. There're very few J/S/B smut stories in net, and I wanted reading more. Thanks!
Scott must really have plenty stamina to please two beautiful ladies over and over. Heh. ^_-
One of my favorite parts was, thought, last Betsy's lines, when she's understood finally Jean's feelings and tells her friend she never lets him go.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28
Did they tell theirs friends then? Hm. I'd believed hearing a deafening "YOU DID WHAT?" some days ago, spreading throughout the whole planet and rippling towards the space void... Heh. I'd loved reading the reactions. ^_^
And the way you set the next scene was downright impeccable. Very well done. It'll be even funnier now they're experimenting...
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29
At last! We've met the Professor and Erik, and we've seen details of Lensherr's household! It's nice seeing how everything are... hanging (I hope you don't want hanging ME for that pun! It was unintended!).
And Scott is meeting at last his future in-laws now. Gulp. All I can tell is... Round One! Ready? Fight!
(I've played too many fighting video games, don't you think? ^_^)
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story..i love your stories even the ones on fanfic-normal...rly good stuff. how will jean's parents react?
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You mentioned other characters ^_^ and I can't wait for Scott to meet Jean's "Fantastic Clusterfuck" of a family, lol!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29
Hey nice chapter, now will the next one be with her parents? Just wondering. Also nice scene with the moving and that finally Xavier and Magneto get shown too. Very nice Wanda/Kurt scene too lol. Although I think you should have had Jean walk in on them at the end there, THAT would have been just perfect.
Hey nice chapter, now will the next one be with her parents? Just wondering. Also nice scene with the moving and that finally Xavier and Magneto get shown too. Very nice Wanda/Kurt scene too lol. Although I think you should have had Jean walk in on them at the end there, THAT would have been just perfect.