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for Hanging By A Moment

by marvelmaster616

person RedPhoenix1821
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I have to totally go cry now! OMG! OMG! OMG! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I'm in tears, man!
person x00001
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't wait to see what happens next
person alrischa
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pffttss...cliffhanger :p Poor Scott *sniff*
person Agent-G
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31

Well I'm not surprised that, that went as bad as it did for Jean and Scott. Man she is really going to give it to them now, I bet she'll never speak to her family again after this and that she'll switch majors because it's what she wants for once. Hmmm....I wonder though if she does they'll cut her off well she could always move in with Scott to save money.
person jott-lover-777
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg...jeans parents are so mean. i actually creid at that part. whats jean gona do?
update soon
person Jenskott
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 31

I'm practically scared. What will Jean do now? Whenever she has one of her temper fits, things get wrecked. A lot.

Poor Scott. He tried, he really tried fitting in, and they spat on his face.
person x00001
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter seems jean is a little happy can't wait to see what happens next
person PockyMuncher
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez! All I can say is...I know people like them -_-;;; I live in that kind of area and lemme tell you...it SUCKS!!! I feel for Jean, here...and Scott, having to deal with them...try to make them at least appreciate his existance ::sighs:: NOT gonna be easy. Hope you update again soon!
person alrischa
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How evil and cruel her parents are! :p
person Agent-G
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30

Jeez you really turned Jean's parents from what I've seen of them in the comics and what little on the show in really bad people. I mean they're almost as bad as Emma's family and that's saying something. Now you know how I feel about making characters OOC even ones you don't see often but I'll let it slid cause I know you needed her parents to be like this in order for the story to work.

I really don't like the sounds of that 'more drastic actoins' part. I can also see why you had a hard time writing this, people like that aren't fun to write.