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for Hanging By A Moment

by marvelmaster616

person jottrockslife
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chap...cant wait 4 more jott
person Agent-G
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34

Damn I wanted to know what the painting was, let me guess you're teasing us with what it is until it's unvieled right? So is the party up next? And very nice Wanda/Kurt scene too that dress sounds perfect for Wanda too. I kind of expected a scarlet/black dress for her but I guess that was too easy to see coming huh? Still I can't wait for the party it sounds like a great chapter. I wonder is there will be a short Rogue/Remy sex scene in that, maybe they go to a closet for a quickie lol.
person alrischa
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shopping for an hour isn't that bad! But it was still adorable to torture Scott with that. lol :D
person x00001
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
person Agent-G
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 33:

Nice little recap there at the start and a nice little Remy/Scott talk. Loved the talks in the field. You know you could really make a nice little one shot or something bassed on Kitty visiting Russia with Piotr if you ever wanted to. It's a bout time Jean is going to study what she wanted lol. I just know that Kitty will be in his poitrait I hope all the other girl's get a little jealous that she'll forever me immortolized like that lol.

nice sex scene at the end with I was kind of getting bored of just Jean/Scott lately lol. It was nice for a change.
person Jenskott
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 33

I see Scott and Jean are doing fine after that battlefield... I mean, Grey Manor. It isn't a wonder Jean dropped her business classes right away, she hated them. And getting her interesed in Psychology was a good reference to the comic, since that was her major in 616 universe -I believed she'd got a teaching degree, but in one of her stories Minisinoo stated it was in Psychology-.

Mmm... Can be in that party where Betsy runs into a certain handsome, tall, blonde man? It'd resemble perfectly the first chapter, when Jean met Scott :). It'd be a perfect opportunity to hook them, since your fic is inexorably winding down -Oh, ruthless world! :(-.

Good Kiotr scene. More, please!

person alrischa
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay update! Could go for more jott though :p
person luvjott
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story...pls update soon...especially jott cause i luv it!
person RedPhoenix1821
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens with Jean and Scott over the summer, maybe he'll propose... Who knows.
person x00001
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter jean seemed really angry at her perents can't wait to see what happens next