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for Hanging By A Moment

by marvelmaster616

person alrischa
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that wasn't quite the surprise I was expecting lol. MORE JOTT! :p
person wen
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
maybe an porposal is coming, or a pregnancy, it's so eas to forgot the pill....
carr on
JOTT FOREVER !
Wen
person Agent-G
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 36

Really nice chapter I loved how you brought in Emma and Vince and the background into it. The honeymoon was a super job too nice work on that. Loved how Emma and Jean got together it's nice and refreshing seeing those two getting alone instead of bitching it out between the two of them. Plus it is kind of funny how both ex's showed up and when Scott first saw Emma that part was just priceless. The look on his face must have been great. Nice to see Betsy and Warren warming up too.

Thanks for the little shout out too lol.
person x00001
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
person jottrockslife
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tat was great...pls pls pls update!
person Jenskott
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Again you've done a great chapter. I loved Marvel's references, of course. And it was funny seeing Raven.

You enjoy doing Rogue and Gambit specially naughty, right? ^_^ And torturing your readers with infamous Peter's picture. I suppose the waiting will be worthwhile :).

Heh, heh. When Scott and Jean were talking and consueling Betsy, I wondered if they'd mention theirs distress-relieving method, when... Warren shows up! Cool! At last we see both ogehter!

And I've observed theirs conversation greatly mirrors Scott and Jean's meeting. Heheheh. I can't wait to see. It isn't a wonder Jean feels puzzled and dumbfounded.
person Agent-G
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah so we finally get to the party, oh man Raven isn't going ot bust in on Rogue and Remy is she? That's a nasty thought, your mother walking in on you as your boyfirend gets you off. Nice to see Warren and Betsy meet I hope you have one sex scene with those two it's bound to be freaky with them. Looking forward to the next chapter as always.
person alrischa
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally! I was starting to think Warren would never show up in the fic :p And nice speech by Xavier. :)
person Jenskott
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Nice. Very nice. And waffy too. The couple scenes were beautiful. I shall make no comment on Scott and Jean because you already know what I think ^_^. But Wankurt scene was good and Kiotr moment incredibly sweet. I suppose you wanted giving them one final scene at least before the ending. And I suppose you intend writing a Gambit/Rogue scene... not that it be a bad thing. Simply I've seen several reviews demanding it, so I think your Romy readers will get a nice reward.

I can't wait to see what happens in the party. :D

One last thing: I believe you should post a Gambit/Rogue session before the end.
person x00001
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't to read the next