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for Hanging By A Moment

by marvelmaster616

person alrischa
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Took you long enough to stop torturing Betsy :p
person x00001
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't belave they got court
person Agent-G
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 37

I liked the talk with Vince and Scott that was very nice. A very touching moment with Kurt and Wanda I liked that. Very funny with Raven taking a picture ver motherly of her lol. I'm not surprised they got caught although I'm surprised Kurt and Raven would want to see Rogue naked and just finished fucking like that. I mean I woulnd't want to see my sister (if I had one) like that. But it did sent a powerful message.

person wen
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARRRGGGHHHHHHHHH you prived us the JOTT moment of the proposal, you better write it in the next chapter ! lol
Wen
person Jenskott
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 37

Thanks for your review, pal! I really appreaciated!

After reading Jean/Emma conversation was nice seeing its mirror in Scott/Vincent. And yes, I picked Slayer's bit.

Am I foreseeing a proposal in this chapter? ^_^

Mystique is the Devil. Even if she isn't Mystique. I can't believe yet she did that.

Rogue/Gambit scene was really nice. And the “And that’s why they call me Rogue, sugah…”
sentence made me laugh.

I'm really looking forward to read the last chapters -Last? What does 'last' mean?It ca't be ending! :(-. Keep on the good work, buddy.
person alrischa
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFL! That was an outrageous chapter! But where's the jott? *whines* :p
person Lil Jean
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ERGH! Update soon! I love this story so much!
person jottrockslife
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great 1...a bit sad tho..
person Jenskott
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 36

Meeting theirs ex in the same party. You'd almost believe it was preordained. ^_^

That was a very interesting chapter. It was curious seeing Emma and Vincent behaving like a married pair, the different behaviors Scott and Jean displayed when they met theirs former crushes and the chat between Jean and Emma. Very curious. And nice. At last we see them talking civilizedly.

Shaw and Leland. Ugh. Poor Emma. It isn't a wonder she wasn't very fond of relationships. Those two could have scared her for life.
person x00001
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i liked it when there x's turned up