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for Hanging By A Moment

by marvelmaster616

person RedPhoenix1821
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You HAVE to do a sequel!!!! I WANT TO SEE A SEQUEL and I WANT TO SEE THEIR WEDDING IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! THIS IS NOW MY NEW FAVORITE CHAPTER!!!!!!!
person x00001
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't belave they are going to get married can't wait to read that chapter its going to be interesting keep up the good work
person Agent-G
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 39

That was very sweat of him to take her to Russia, visit his family maybe? Man that would be a nice little one-shot or something at one point but I know how busy you are so I won't hold my breath lol. I just loved that proposal I mean Jean's reaction was very cool to read.

I can't WAIT to see the reactions from everyone about this, those will be just so great to read. Man can't belive this is over but it was a great fic be proud man and you know I'm looking forward to other things from this Hanging Universe and your next fic too.
person alrischa
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE YOU!!!!!! All we need now is a wedding *hint hint* ;)
person Jenskott
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 39

So at last we saw the painting! I could picture the description in my head, and sure it sounded beautfiul.

So beautiful like the end of the chapter, where we have a major view of the pairings and of their evolution.

And finally, the proposal. So, so beautiful. And so, so fitting for finishing the fic.

And now there's only one chapter left. Sniff. I wodner what you can narrate for closing properly the fic. Perhaps the wedding and the honeymoon? :)
person jottrockslife
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww....jean and scott are gettin married...thats so sweet you know!
person Wen
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JJOOTTTTTTTTTTTT pleeaasseee
Wen
person Jenskott
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 38

Well, Warren/Betsy fans have been several chapters waiting for the moment where they finally meet and get ansty. And although I can only speak for myself, I doubt they're disappointed.

That was freaking awesome. Heh. They couldn't have enough from each other. I loved seeing them so naughty. And the bit where Warren calls Betsy an angel... was too pretty for words.

Other than the sex scene, I was glad of seeing Warren doesn't hold a grudge with Jean, but he realized they were being forced into something both of they were reluctant about. But that's Warren: nice to a fault. ^_^
person x00001
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
person Agent-G
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 38

I'm glad you finally were able to work in a Warren/Betsy scene that was a fun one to read and boy those two are truely a kinky pair and a perfect match for each other lol. This was a great chapter and you know I look forward to the next one.