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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
A very nice look on Scott's past, you can tell you did your research in certain areas. And it's nice to know the background of them in this world you made. One thing bothers me though. If Scott was shot shouldn't she have notice a bullet scar on his chest from their night together and even in the shower.
A very nice look on Scott's past, you can tell you did your research in certain areas. And it's nice to know the background of them in this world you made. One thing bothers me though. If Scott was shot shouldn't she have notice a bullet scar on his chest from their night together and even in the shower.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I liked a lot the dialogue between Scott and Jean, and the way you change theirs pasts, while trying keeping you true to the original characters. The idea of Logan and Ororo being Scott's forefathers is too good for words.
And the '“Live huh? Well I guess you’ll just have to be my guide.” line was downright great. I think it defines completely what Jean means for Scott. She prods him to come out of his shell, to empatyze with other people and allow himself feel. She's really her guide to live.
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written jott fluff and smut. I couldn't ask for more ;) You know I'm looking forward to reading more!
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know, I know, I'm an evil child. ^_^ under 18 and reading NC fics, but you're a really good writer so I thought I'd check this story out. Looks good so far, but I'm waiting for the RoLo combo! ^_^ Peace out.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! Loved the Romy!! Fav pairing of all time!!! hope to see more of this fic!!! It's great!!!!
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And another great chapter. I laughed a lot reading the interrogatory, and I loved the restroom scene. It was funny!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
A very nice look at how Jean feels about that time with Scott. Like her getting defensive and telling Betsy he's taken, not to mention I bet she told them all the details about her other times without any problems. I look forward to their real date. Didn't see Rogue as the kind for sex in public places that's a sure way to get caught. Wonder if they would in a furture chapter by their firends or worse...Kurt...now there's an image that would scar him for life lol.
A very nice look at how Jean feels about that time with Scott. Like her getting defensive and telling Betsy he's taken, not to mention I bet she told them all the details about her other times without any problems. I look forward to their real date. Didn't see Rogue as the kind for sex in public places that's a sure way to get caught. Wonder if they would in a furture chapter by their firends or worse...Kurt...now there's an image that would scar him for life lol.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful chapter. Please, continue. I want reading more from your story.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is really good!! I never liked Jean and Scott but this is very well written! I cant wait till you update! And for the Romy!!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
Nice I just loved the fluff in this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I was wondering about Rogue and Kurt's mom Mystique, would she look like her Principle Darkholme look if she's in this?
Nice I just loved the fluff in this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I was wondering about Rogue and Kurt's mom Mystique, would she look like her Principle Darkholme look if she's in this?