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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amother great chapter man this story keeps getting better and better
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter. A series I can sincerely ENJOYING reading isn't very common, specially in smut fics. Thanks. Please, keep up this. You're doing an excellent work.
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
Yeah military people are VERY strict about being tidy my little brother is in the army now and he said the same thing. Nice little bit with X-factor there, that nearly made me laugh seeing it. Cute with Jean being jealous of Sarah there although I was expecting her to be younger then him but it does work with Jean's famliy and her sister too.
I can't wait to see what happens next, will Jean finally realize she found herself 'the one' and what will she tell the other girls?
Yeah military people are VERY strict about being tidy my little brother is in the army now and he said the same thing. Nice little bit with X-factor there, that nearly made me laugh seeing it. Cute with Jean being jealous of Sarah there although I was expecting her to be younger then him but it does work with Jean's famliy and her sister too.
I can't wait to see what happens next, will Jean finally realize she found herself 'the one' and what will she tell the other girls?
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah for smut! Great way to get the day of homework started ;) Loving it, wanting more! :D
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry for having not reviewed earlier. I must tell this chapter was exceptional. I really loved it. The talk was beautiful and touching. And your way of using old Scott and Jean's traumas to develop theirs pasts and personalities was amazing. A nice interlude between sex scenes shows how you are trying giving real depth to the tale.
By the way, I've noticed you're using background of other stories of yours.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
Another nice chapter I see you put in elements of Evolution of the Heart in this with Scott singing on the streets. It's also nice that those two could share each other's pain like that and will make them closer to each other later on. It was really touching at certain places too like how Scott described the plane crash and how Jean dealt with Annie's death.
Another nice chapter I see you put in elements of Evolution of the Heart in this with Scott singing on the streets. It's also nice that those two could share each other's pain like that and will make them closer to each other later on. It was really touching at certain places too like how Scott described the plane crash and how Jean dealt with Annie's death.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter, you know I do. The conversation was handled really well, simple yet emotionally powerful. Can't wait for the smut that's coming up ;)
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter man its nice to scott a jean together i like this non power story of your its great
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter my friend i can't wait to read the next chapter
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent story. Are X-23 and Alex going to show up? Liked Ororo and Logan being his foster parents. Keep the terrific work.