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Chapter 10
Nice look at the others and I loved the Piotr/Kitty set up and I can't wait to see how the painting goes. I also liked the girls interaction but boy did you really make Besty a 'potty mouth' in this LOL.

I can't wait for Kurt/Wanda and a nice look at Rogue/Remy. It seems to me that Rogue wants more out of their relationship then just sex I think. Prsonally she should come out I mean what's the wrost that could happen?

Love the Romyness, but I'm thinking that Rogue may want more.

It was a good chapter, specially the last part where Scott encourages Jean to try pursuing a relationship. I enjoyed reading that.

I was somewhat surprised of Scott dated Candy Southern, since she was Warren's girlfriend in canon. Personally I had chosen Lee Forrester or Coleen Wing. In fact I think Coleen would fit with the personality you made up to Scott's second date.

Though I was puzzled when Jean explained why she had broken up with Warren. First she says their personalities were closer and after they were too different? Well, I suppose you meant they were compatible like friends, but not like lovers. I agree wholeheartedly. Warren and Jean can get along well, but there isn't... spark.

And I laughed when I heard WHO had done Scott gave up the idea of meeting true love some day. Definitely she is NOT a woman capable of showing it. Even though you did Emma nicer here -I must congratulate your efforts for not giving in bashing and portraying her like an evil bitch-, she and Scott have absolutely nothing in common.

great chapter i liked the way you told of there pass love lives that was great i can't wait to see what happens next

*teary eyed* An ending to a chapter fit for jott. :)

Very nice look into their last relationships. I get the feeling that Besty will have a freaky side to match Warren's. You know I nearly laughed that my OC baasically stole Scott's girlfriend since he's not the type to do that on purpose but still it's kind of funny. At least those two are FINALLY going to try and have a relationhsip with each other and we all know they'll find love with each other.

great chapter man of jean and scott talkig about there pasts

I'm mildly surprised that Duncan and Taryn didn't come across as jerks, but then again, you are totally against character bashing, so. :p Hurrah for smut, definitely looking forward to more! XD

Chapter 8
Well it's nice to see what their first times were and like I told you Logan talking about sex is just funny, I mean I can't really picture him doing that. Ororo yes since she pretty much was naked all the time in that village where she lived in Africa. You know I would have thought Duncan would have been pretty bad for Jean's first time, maybe because I don't like that guy.

As for Scott's first time, I take it she was a bit experienced from that description. ALthough I think it is easier for guys then woman. I can't wait to see what's next and the other couples especially.

Beautiful. I must tell I liked how you explore the differences and similarities, regarding relationships and sexuality, between men and women. There was good hindsight here.

Other than that... I think you could have spared us from the Duncan scene. O, well, never mind. And I have much fun reading how Logan advised Scott about pleased women. God, I can picture Logan explaining that, but I think telling it to his son had to be awkward not matter what.

I like how Scott and Jean's personalities are, as similar and yet so different.

These chapters are very good, but I think in the next one you must focus in another couple to balance the story. I'm looking forward to Warren and Betsy.