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Hey good job 27 is by far my favorite chapter. Keep up the good work, that scene between Scott, Jean, and Betsy was very well done. I'll read more later.

Hey man this is really good, I liked reading this part and all about Jean meetng Scott's family. Keep up the good work, but the openness of Scott's family at times was very interesting. Keep up the good work I'll read more later.

Well I've read up to chapter 8 I got to say this is really good, you went all out on this. I look forward to reading the rest, but it will have to wait until later, I cant wait to read the rest of this. The scenes between Scott and Jean have been done really well, so much so that I think I might have to use them for inspiration for a fic I'm writing now. Take it easy.

nice chapter cant wait to see how the rest of this goes. I never thought of Jean like that but I like where this is headed, also I intend to read as many chapters as possible since I'm off today.

great chapter

Chapter 40: That was a very nice ending there, I didn't expect you to go into the furture like that and then back to the big news (I'm glad you did that, that was fun to read) but man hard to believe it's finally over, well I know you will have a lot more fun with this little universe and it's going to be great just like I plan to enjoy the next fic you're working on too.

YEAH!!!!!! YOU MUST MUST MUST WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!! OR A PREQUEL OR SOMETHING I LOVE THIS STORY TOO MUCH NOT TO SEE SOME IN BETWEEN SIGHTS THAT HAPPENED OVER THE YEARS BETWEEN THOSE TWO!!!!

I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!! JOTT KIDS OMG!!!!!!! Such beauty in the world. *sniff*

Ahhh... Great ending to a great story. Moving forward the story to ten years in the future was a good and original move. You know I loved hearing about some of the kids -Nate, Ray, Luna, Talya- and the lives the different pairings have led. And the scene where Scott and Jean, both in theirs thirties, make love... It reminded me from Minisinoo's fics.

Thanks for writing such great fic.

ok dude.. here's the deal as far as chapter 39.. first up, i reviewed this story way back at like chapter 8 or something.. its been a long as road since then.. and like then, i still feel the same way.. once in a while every single title of fanfiction; wether its comics, cartoons, movies or whatever, they each have one story that sets it apart from the other submissions.. for the x-men evo.. dude.... yours is that one fic that is apart from the rest.. from your first chapter your story got into the characters lives and wanted readers wanting to know more.. THERE ARE NO COMPLAINTS..
but woh... woh...... woh.......... hold up.. i stil wana say some shit.. and damn there's alot to say.. but i'll summarize for ya dude.. u dealt wit a hella lot of topics in this story and u brought up a lot of shit.. u brought in the social classes and the WAR.. and woh.. u played it incredibly well.. it felt like a movie, ya kno that shits gona happen and u dnt wana watch it happen but u jus cant find it in yourself to stand up and leave.. and ya jus had to put in the threesome huh..? :) i wont even comment on that.. well...... if jean aint there, betsy is the next in line.. and hold up.. is it jus me or do writers and creators of xmen always put cyclops wit a psychic?! eh..... i aint complainin.. except for the fact that GRANT MORRISON spit in the face of every fan of scott and jean with his run in the comics.. bastard.................
wel.. back to u dude.. great story.. the best in this category.. great run.. got me annoyed wen u wer only puttin out one chapter a week but like a crack addict, i'll always pop in lookin' for the next fix.. great run and i cant wait for the next chapter.. well done.. well done dude.. NEXT STORY!!!