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I loved how Kitty was all nervous at the begining of this and then she slowly got over it. Very nice how they got together and I guess Besty will be even more into a bad mood with yet ANOTHER couple. Man if she doesn't meet Warren soon she might lose it. Anways great chapter as usual and keep up the great work.

Another fine chapter. I can tell Betsy needs really a man -and everybody of us know who taht man is and hope he gets introudced soon-. And Scott and Jean a shower urgently. A COLD shower, I mean. Christ, they can't keep theirs hands aprt each other for long, can they?

And they're corrupting other people's minds. Such bad example. Tsk, tsk.

More, please! Look at me, I'm begging!

Well I've never reviewed one of these things before, but this seemed like a good enough place to start. Well this is really one of the most well written fanfics ever, you really fleshed out everything well and took a very interesting AU approach. I really like the way you portrayed and presented Scott as a noble, soldier, gentlemen type. I have friends in the military and the marines and I always have the utmost respect and admiration to them, and I believe supporting them takes precendence above all else no matter what. You're descriptions of Scott as a soldier seemed very personal and realistic.

I've never been much of a fan of the Jean/Scott pairing, but this story actually made me one. Scott seemed like a much cooler guy to be around, and Jean didn't come off as a little miss perfect. So I'm anxious to see what direction you take them, since it seems like you are developing them to be perfect for each other. They seem ready to make their relationship official, although I don't know how much more official you can get when you are dating only one person and sexually flirt with them in a gym then proceed to do you know what in a locker room.

I like the Wanda/Kurt pairing, but it seemed a little too spontaneous. You just showed Kurt as such a shy guy, it didn't seem like something he would do. I mean you wrote it great, just a little IMHO.

So now it looks like you are doing Piotr/Kitty, and I can only guess it might involve some sort of..."nude" portrait modeling ;) .

Keep up the great work with this story, and the thing I can't wait to see is Jean bringing Scott home to see her parents. From your and Jean's descriptions it just seems like it would be a "Guess Who's Comming To Dinner" "Meet The Parents" scenario that would be too great to avoid. I can easily see Jean's blueblood, snobby family not immediately taking to working class marine, Scott.

great chapter man now wanda and kurt are in love with each other

Chapter 11

Well that was a nice chapter and it seems both Jean and Scott have a nice little naughty side in them, and I'm glad that Kurt and Wanda hooked up although that was a unique way not that I'm complaining. I wonder how Pietro will like that epsecially if say he walks in on them LOL. Anyways cool chapter and yeah Betsy is jealous but she'll find her man later on as I know you so well as to who to pair her up with.

Wow, that was a lot of intense smut going on, and you know how much I love jott smut. ;) Can't wait to see how you'll top this chapter in the next one.

I lvoed it. I know I'm repeating myself too often, but I don't see other way to tell it. Your history is fantastic. The non-sex scenes aren't simple prologues, completely forgettable, to the tough stuff but important pieces where the story is narrated and the characters examined. And the sex scenes are really well written.

What is happening to Rogue?

I love this story. The depth and demensions of the characters. The openness. I can't wait for the art scene between Piotr and Kitty! I am anxiously awaiting more chapters. Don't stop writing!!

great chapter can'tt wait to see what ahppens next

You do not fail to make your hatred for your poetry class known in your fic lol! Kitty and Piotr were so sweet, Scott and Jean were adorable as always and Romy smut. *happy sigh*